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Unfinished Dream Ft TitoBronsky
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3396493
"unfinished dream Ft Tito" links------------------------------ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219987 Q n Duece http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220432 H.D |
im sorta in a "don't fuck with me" mood
so...I'll leave abbreviated feed CHO...learn better breath control brotha...u sound like u have ADD I don't like ur dubbing...out of sync also...the clips are gimmicky...keep em at the beginning or the end...they took away from ur verse Tito...flow was stock...str8 all the way through, nothin major one way or the other Cho...flow was cool...not great...not bad...= pretty decent lyrically...heard a few good lines here and there str8 drop fellas...it lacks direction though 1 |
u dropped 2 of the same links
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sry mom....
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aight dis beats coo...1st dude...lyricz is aight..flows ok could be tighter...deliverys aiight nahmean doesnt really sound natural tho...2nd cat lyricz is aiiight dont like dem clips in da verse shit is stupid 2 me honestly...flows str8...deliverys ok...overall dis track was decent could use sum work hea & there
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dope... preciate the lunchin
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beat is pretty cool...1st mc- ur style is cool nothin i wannna comment on 2 much maybe more emotion 2nd mc- wasnt feelin at all...sorry dude i just wasnt feelin ur delivery...and add some more emotion ur talkin tough man u gotta sound it... lyrics was cool though...LOL like the outro...didnt like the sample before it...keep at it ya'll
peep me:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467 |
riseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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i'll leave feed rite here.... umm you suck ..... k ? |
top it .................
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cho ure flow sucks ass
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thanx for the feed dumb ass^^^
rise |
rise.....................
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to the top .....
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can we get a lil feed damn it???!!!!!!!!^*%*($##$(^#(^($^#(^(*^(*())(*&)%%&^^@@@@$UOIUUP^^%((%*^(*&^*&
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