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Pensive vs TheSinnister
Battle Rules: 10-20 lines.
Topic: Liquid Dreams 6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting It's all in jest people. Vote, or I'll have your nutts on a platter. Peace. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-01-06 at 07:31 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
TheSinnister has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-06 06:21 PM.
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Silence futile words Kill my frailty inside Darken fearful eye , Without a sound he fights to sleep Alright Liquid Dreams drown out his life,Goodbye Will power, and pride Now he creeps in humans tears, when they sleep ,they will fear Fluent Liquids everywhere, My inner side, lies chants dispair In this place nothing near, No controll no way to steer Come look into the mirror of dreams and face the agony... Cast into the pit of reprisal within your mind, not me Brooding gloom is everywhere, I'm mixing my blood with chemistry Is this illusion not of this world but a dream within a dream? As i float to extacy The depth of reality inceases as it seems The ground is so far but the sky's out of reach |
Silence futile words Kill my frailty inside Darken fearful eye , Without a sound he fights to sleep Alright Liquid Dreams drown out his life,Goodbye Will power, and pride Now he creeps in humans tears, when they sleep ,they will fear Fluent Liquids everywhere, My inner side, lies chants dispair In this place nothing near, No controll no way to steer Come look into the mirror of dreams and face the agony... Cast into the pit of reprisal within your mind, not me Brooding gloom is everywhere, I'm mixing my blood with chemistry Is this illusion not of this world but a dream within a dream? As i float to extacy The depth of reality inceases as it seems The ground is so far but the sky's out of reach |
Pensive has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-06 07:22 PM.
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.. Time roams until the night sews .. Our might condoned into a light home .. As fright owns everything we vision .. From thoughts .. To nocturnal emissions To verbal incisions w/ vivid dimensions. .. Internal wishes caked with a fate sealed .. So forgo the real world & escape to unreal Retake the wheel.. As we unravel times spool For minds schooled & ruled to a space, Where irate taste is the basis for distaste. .. Drink the murk of hate, or be that state .. I'm talking'.. Face to face w/ something innate Contemplate race & entwine ya' mind at the seams .. As your cortex pours the means across ya’ core .. Across the beams as sleep explodes a liquid dream. |
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This was feedback posted for Pensive
hey..checkin pollz fam.
its going to be a good battle...but i think u should get this. |
damn can we get a vote please?????????????????????
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still sleepin on it.................................
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