young dollar vs josh654789
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-20-05 at 12:09 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

josh654789 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-17-05 12:13 PM.

alright man, so im ready now, lets do this real quick..

Just PM me when u tell me u dropped ya lines cuz i aint waist raps if u dont drop

yo if your young dollar than i must be a 5
after this battle youll need a couple franklins to stay alive
just cuz im new to the site you think i aint gonna put up a fight
thats like askin me if i got a light
i always do, and i'll grab this gun and start lightin up you
this is somethin that was written real quick for fun
but its enough to turn your record into a 1 an 1

Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 08:48 PM.

Let me get at dis nigga ri quick

Slite opener

Allow me to put some "respect" on dudes "neck"
Look kitty its gon take mo than rappN about ya "tech"/
.............

Dis nigga "joke for fun",while im ready to "poke a nun"
u hyped up wit knives, but still aint pokin none/

dude n class playn w/ "pokemon",while im"pokin a mom"
Nigga talkin shit like bush but not droppin a "bomb"/

Battelin me is like lining up to be loosing,
Beatin a pussy nigga, catchn a case of vaginal "brusing/

Quit playin cuz u'll catch heat in ya "Elmo suit,"
LeavN da block hot, havN to walk in a "thermosuit"/

Dollar done with infra-red cuz now its "infra-green",
Dont get ya block mopped as if ya name was "Mr.Clean"/

RV Hold auditions cuz boy is jus "lyrical Crap"
aint Done shit on RV so I cant make "personal fact"//

Dont come at me w/ weak shit,Gaurentee to "Merk Dis"
Da way i clown dis nigga,u'd think RV runnin a "Circus"



Aint nuffin much tryna go easy on da rook

This was feedback posted for Young Dollar
 

If I don't give feedback my vote doesn'¡t counts... but my vote would be for u, no hate but it was better in everything and I'm too tired to vote....
......................................check da polls

Come on and vote for the battle and give a nigga da win cuz its not contest who won........Homie verse wasnt consider decent.....uppin

uppin.................................vote on dis battle so i can cop my win and move on wit thangs

Vote on dis battle plz its a shame that i've waisted taltent on fool in da firstplace

Omg Yo Somebody Vote..........dis Is How Bush Became President Niggas Didnt Vote>..........uppin!!!!!!!!!!

Atleast somebody vote one time so a nigga can cop a vote

Man im still uppin for more votes
bitchin for more vote
tippin for votes
shit i made a rap for more votes

Voted For: Young Dollar

EZ Win 4 Young Dollar......................

Much More Complex Verse Wid Da Punches & Wordplay, Few Lines Were Needless, & Sorta Came Across Az Fillers, An U Culd Use Sum Personal [cuz u lacked personals in our battle 2 dolla] But Styll U Certainly Did Enough 2 Get Da Win

Josh=
Not A Good Verse Hommie, Way 2 Basic, Nuthin Original & Yo Wordplay Juz Didnt Have And Effect On Da Battle, Up Yo Game [no hate]

==Read Da Verses & Da Outcome Explains Its self==

Return Da Favor In Mah Sig [but if u voted already then hit up one ov my other battles, they everywhere on frontlines] Or I'll Have 2 Remove Mah Vote

Pz Out, Good Job All, Stay Up & Keep Da Rhymes Comin'