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28. Given Light Vs. 37. Tephlon
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This kid still can't block shots even with the name he's wearing
Poor guys so derranged when I flipped his name, he still wasn't south bearing Pfffff, the only thing we'll need this kid for is to fill the shelters Cause you couldn't put together two bars if you was a fucking welder How can you even think about judging someone else...... When your so wack, you pullin ya jokes off a book shelf Fuck, it's another g-unit fan, man these guys have no skill So even if your looking up to them as roll models, you still going downhill And we all know that Jay-Z was famous for his big dick suckin lips Cause like a fat kid and food, this is just another shit ripped.... Word. |
lol, check it........
kid was ''Given Light'' from a torch, typical........so now he thinks he shines The Energizer bunny couldnt even charge ya brain power for these Rhymes fuck punchlines! i saw ya battle vs ''hellz fire''...u got no defence, just Retire thinkin' u got skill? HA!...Go write a topical on yourself about being a LIAR your flows aint nothin but ''played''....like a radio station over doin' it.. dude trys ta cypher an even his whole crew sayin ...''stop! doin ruin' it'' u got audios? ..shit, emcees ''shred'' the paper you attempt ta write On this aint no topical shit, be sure the next time u sign its for the Right One cause this aint your thing, its obvious with this K.O in the 1st Round... ya far from PHAT, Even an english bumb is weighin up more Pounds.. ........................................... WORD. Explanation: the closer is the only explanation really, but phat (FAT)...An for the british people who dont know, we weight shit in Pounds (Lbs)...an british money is called ''pounds''....simple wordplay really, just thought i'd break it down. |
Ight be ready, because i'm doing real voting none of that FL and EFL dickrider shit
Given Light: This kid still can't block shots even with the name he's wearing Poor guys so derranged when I flipped his name, he still wasn't south bearing wack Pfffff, the only thing we'll need this kid for is to fill the shelters Cause you couldn't put together two bars if you was a fucking welder like the concept, first line was wack, had potential but wack How can you even think about judging someone else...... When your so wack, you pullin ya jokes off a book shelf lol, this was ok.......... Fuck, it's another g-unit fan, man these guys have no skill So even if your looking up to them as roll models, you still going downhill hmmm, like concept was ok........ And we all know that Jay-Z was famous for his big dick suckin lips Cause like a fat kid and food, this is just another shit ripped.... played as hell...fat kid lines= :nono: overall a ight verse, not good not too bad elevate some 6.0/10 Tephlon: kid was ''Given Light'' from a torch, typical........so now he thinks he shines The Energizer bunny couldnt even charge ya brain power for these Rhymes THIS IS PLAYED AS FUCK! fuck punchlines! i saw ya battle vs ''hellz fire''...u got no defence, just Retire thinkin' u got skill? HA!...Go write a topical on yourself about being a LIAR not feeling this....... your flows aint nothin but ''played''....like a radio station over doin' it.. dude trys ta cypher an even his whole crew sayin ...''stop! doin ruin' it'' lol, made me laugh but was aight u got audios? ..shit, emcees ''shred'' the paper you attempt ta write On this aint no topical shit, be sure the next time u sign its for the Right One ok........ cause this aint your thing, its obvious with this K.O in the 1st Round... ya far from PHAT, Even an english bumb is weighin up more Pounds.. NO...... 6.5/10 you had a better verse, not much better not a good verse had some wack lines i wasted how much time voting on this battle, bitches, lol and dont explain your punches next time fool.... V/Tephlon |
Given Light:
This kid still can't block shots even with the name he's wearing Poor guys so derranged when I flipped his name, he still wasn't south bearing aight not bad...could have been slightly iller. Pfffff, the only thing we'll need this kid for is to fill the shelters Cause you couldn't put together two bars if you was a fucking welder great analogy...first time ive seen this one. How can you even think about judging someone else...... When your so wack, you pullin ya jokes off a book shelf wow, played Fuck, it's another g-unit fan, man these guys have no skill So even if your looking up to them as roll models, you still going downhill good, im feeling it And we all know that Jay-Z was famous for his big dick suckin lips Cause like a fat kid and food, this is just another shit ripped.... haha, bomb closure. *decent verse, had most of the qualifying elements. ya got some good punches off ya had some lines in there that ive never heard before and one ive hear a million times. or seen...word. but um, not bad...well see how tephlon does... Tephlon: kid was ''Given Light'' from a torch, typical........so now he thinks he shines The Energizer bunny couldnt even charge ya brain power for these Rhymes good opener, good personal. fuck punchlines! i saw ya battle vs ''hellz fire''...u got no defence, just Retire thinkin' u got skill? HA!...Go write a topical on yourself about being a LIAR uh huh, had no flow whatsoever. your flows aint nothin but ''played''....like a radio station over doin' it.. dude trys ta cypher an even his whole crew sayin ...''stop! doin ruin' it'' aight not bad, try again. u got audios? ..shit, emcees ''shred'' the paper you attempt ta write On this aint no topical shit, be sure the next time u sign its for the Right One again, line was aight...but get more indepth with it. cause this aint your thing, its obvious with this K.O in the 1st Round... ya far from PHAT, Even an english bumb is weighin up more Pounds.. i dont think this cut it.... *verse was aight, at first i was really feelin it, had good punches and flow and all... then the skill level started to die down, like you was writing this while you was falling asleep. not bad, just didnt cut... your verse being a bit mal toward the middle-end...makes GL's verse stand out. so im gonng go with GL. vote: Given Light good verses yall, and good luck to both. [B]Diman Can Vote, Alias Is Eph |
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Both could have came way harder... Vote: Tephlon |
Given Light-
This kid still can't block shots even with the name he's wearing Poor guys so derranged when I flipped his name, he still wasn't south bearing pretty weak......2/10 Pfffff, the only thing we'll need this kid for is to fill the shelters Cause you couldn't put together two bars if you was a fucking welder lol..........7/10 How can you even think about judging someone else...... When your so wack, you pullin ya jokes off a book shelf (no comment)<<<<<<lets leave it at that....1/10 Fuck, it's another g-unit fan, man these guys have no skill So even if your looking up to them as roll models, you still going downhill decent......5/10 And we all know that Jay-Z was famous for his big dick suckin lips Cause like a fat kid and food, this is just another shit ripped.... not feelin it....3/10 OVERALL-18/50 Tephlon- kid was ''Given Light'' from a torch, typical........so now he thinks he shines The Energizer bunny couldnt even charge ya brain power for these Rhymes not feelin it........3/10 fuck punchlines! i saw ya battle vs ''hellz fire''...u got no defence, just Retire thinkin' u got skill? HA!...Go write a topical on yourself about being a LIAR poor attempt at a punch...3/10 your flows aint nothin but ''played''....like a radio station over doin' it.. dude trys ta cypher an even his whole crew sayin ...''stop! doin ruin' it'' aint feelin that one to much...4/10 u got audios? ..shit, emcees ''shred'' the paper you attempt ta write On this aint no topical shit, be sure the next time u sign its for the Right One decent..........5/10 cause this aint your thing, its obvious with this K.O in the 1st Round... ya far from PHAT, Even an english bumb is weighin up more Pounds.. lol..............7/10 OVERALL-22/50 |
Given Light:
This kid still can't block shots even with the name he's wearing Poor guys so derranged when I flipped his name, he still wasn't south bearing ^^ok bar 4/10 Pfffff, the only thing we'll need this kid for is to fill the shelters Cause you couldn't put together two bars if you was a fucking welder ^^nice bar 7/10 How can you even think about judging someone else...... When your so wack, you pullin ya jokes off a book shelf ^^no 2/10 Fuck, it's another g-unit fan, man these guys have no skill So even if your looking up to them as roll models, you still going downhill ^^good bar 6/10 And we all know that Jay-Z was famous for his big dick suckin lips Cause like a fat kid and food, this is just another shit ripped.... ^^no 3/10 Overall: 22/50 (44%) Tephlon: kid was ''Given Light'' from a torch, typical........so now he thinks he shines The Energizer bunny couldnt even charge ya brain power for these Rhymes ^^decent opener 5/10 fuck punchlines! i saw ya battle vs ''hellz fire''...u got no defence, just Retire thinkin' u got skill? HA!...Go write a topical on yourself about being a LIAR ^^ehh 4/10 your flows aint nothin but ''played''....like a radio station over doin' it.. dude trys ta cypher an even his whole crew sayin ...''stop! doin ruin' it'' ^^lol nice 7/10 u got audios? ..shit, emcees ''shred'' the paper you attempt ta write On this aint no topical shit, be sure the next time u sign its for the Right One ^^good bar 6/10 cause this aint your thing, its obvious with this K.O in the 1st Round... ya far from PHAT, Even an english bumb is weighin up more Pounds.. ^^good metas 6/10 Overall: 28/50 (56%) Vote: Tephlon Battle Closed Tephlon Wins 4-1 |
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