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In-Vision 06-07-04 12:46 AM

Punchline Prince Vs. Wildfire
 
you drop first

10-40 bars

no dick ridin, no hate votes

good luck homie

Punchline Prince 06-07-04 01:50 AM

If you had amnesha, this you would still remeber
Why they call you wild fire,your about as hot as december
But see my spit is like a lyricall ember
And if you flew me ya demo in tha mail id return 2 sender
U from oregan huh,that aint where thugz congregate
Thats where fags masturbate,and bent over 2 get butt raped
And the reason i know is cause u mailed me the tape
You was the one in the background feedin bobby the grapes
Back on task to slayin and mercin this man
Put that heat to ya face,now u walk around wit a ceilin fan
And who knows where your sexually preference stands
Prolly the type that walk around wit 5 gay pride wristbands
when i pull outta tha slab,u still valetin ya kickstand
And stop using ya right,at least give the left hand a chance


quick spit;in a rush

In-Vision 06-07-04 03:33 AM

I'm hot as december? motha fucka thats wack/
K.O Prince with PUNCH-lines with my hands behind my back/

You forgot the M homie you meant lyricall "Member"/
meaning lyricall dick, you just got Lyrically dismembered/

yall must be blind if you like his verse cause his rhymes are far from dope/
I'll make this faggot choke/break his rhymes like yoke/than pick them apart and take a smoke/

than i take advantage of Total relaxation/ as you act like easy masturbation/get beat once, your done for the night and take a long vacation/

Prince don't honor Hip Hop/ he on a stiff cock/
When his shit drops/ he gets off/ only to leave the dick tossed/ and use the creamy paste for lip gloss/

It's shitty/ that I must take pitty/ on this faggot prince thats all dressed up and pretty/that knows more than I do about oregons gay pride commitee/

and your right, I'm not a thug, I'd be ashamed to say I was/
All i need is my words to squash this bug, and I do it just because/

Who the fuck is bobby? your homie from gaycouples.com?/
If this was war It'd be half a soldier verse all of vietnam/

and right now...I'm usin no hands, I piss on you freely/
It's easy/ to say to yourself "man this gangstas cheesy"/

so now this the end, it's "game over", I've flipped all your best lines/
after he reads the results this faggot will say "sthuper thath fine"/

DeHotBwoy 06-07-04 01:22 PM

OK ill get to this later and vote iight 1 later

Punchline Prince 06-07-04 01:23 PM

uppin fa votes

Know-Gimix 06-07-04 02:09 PM

This battle was o.k... I think Punchline Princes structure was better, overall- but both kinda lacked flow and neither had any really killer punchlines but I think Wild Fire had a better closing bar and he shows slightly more complex punchlines... You gotta work on your structure though kikko- it looks really sloppy the way your bars keep changing format and length through the verse. I think even though Punchline Princes punchlines were more basic, I think Wild Fires Structure killed his verse.. Vote Punchline Prince.. Please return the favor.... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356

CaliCollegeGurl 06-07-04 02:18 PM

Y'all didn't specify no feeding, so Wildfire ripped Punchline on personals hands down. Punchline had the structure on lock, and just flowed better. This line was clean,"U from oregan huh,that aint where thugz congregate Thats where fags masturbate,and bent over 2 get butt raped" Punchline also took it on vocab.

v/Punchline

In-Vision 06-07-04 04:54 PM

are you kidding me...how was that line "clean"? I'm not a thug, thats not what battling is about..that line was completely irrelevant to anything...and if I ripped it on personals why would you give the vote to him..damn

Punchline Prince 06-07-04 05:43 PM

uppin fa dem votes maine

.VenoM. 06-07-04 05:48 PM

that line was ugly as fuck..................................

40CaliberHitz 06-08-04 11:12 AM

Punches:WildFire
InTro:WildFire
OutTro:WildFire
Personals:WildFire
Complex:WildFire

Overall:WildFire His verse was alittle weak with structure wise but he still hit in all angles. Punches,Personal, & Complex. Also I Do See Any No Crew Votes! I'm Being Honest..WildFire Took This!

blackwell 06-08-04 12:10 PM

yea well I think wildfire took this one wit ease, he lines were better n hes punches were thought up much better than princes, u had sum tripple rhymin bars but they werent all that, keep it up man.

prince man ya shit was ok, the first punch bout December was like ya best punch(n it werent all that) no offense, ya structure was a bit off as well, dun stretch ya bars like dat coz makes it hard 2 read, but just work on ya flow, punches, n structure, just keep battlin man n it will come, wen u get better maybe u can chuck sum multies in 2 ^^.http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126445

hit me up on my battle. My vote = wildfire

In-Vision 06-08-04 06:30 PM

thanks for the votes I'll hit up your battle soon...

.VenoM. 06-08-04 07:03 PM

aight check it

wildfire:
flow:8/10
punchlines:7/10
vocab:7/10
Complexity:7/10
overall...29/40

comment...you were pretty consistant...through out the whole thing...

Fav/line:Prince don't honor Hip Hop/ he on a stiff cock/
When his shit drops/ he gets off/ only to leave the dick tossed/ and use the creamy paste for lip gloss/

punchline prince:

Flow:6/10
vocab:7/10
Punches:6/10
COmplextiy:7/10
overall:26/40

Comment you need to live up to ur name bitch...<<<you fuickin no show...but anyways you lost this....

Fav/line: wasnt one


v/wildfire

For$akeN 06-08-04 08:16 PM

aight well this battle was sorta evenly matched a bit Punchline you improving
I read your first drop and not as good as this one but I have to give this to
Wildfire because he came a little bit harder in punches & that took my vote
flow was evenly matched, vocab you name it

but anywayz vote goes to Wildfire

no hate big up to both of you good battle


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