Personal Freestyle (PLEASE READ)
What I rated:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...15&page=2&pp=15 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=181112 Hey mann, I could go with a beat, or go accapella It doesnt matter what it is, Ill still be knockin fellas Knock them off there feet, make em sick, back and retreat Feel the lyrical heat, my lyrics will give ya a mental defeat Leave ya brain dead, leave ya just sittin in silence Ya wont be able ta give ur 15 cents, lyrical violence The gave me the name Supamann, cus I never stop workin Ya like he fake, lookin at me real fuckin absurd man Naaw, Im not talkin bout that kinda work, not any of that I tried it, got caught 2 days after I started, fuckin rats Not caught by police, not tha schools, not my mother By myself, realized I didnt wanna be like my hood brothers And not my actual brothers, but by my brothers in the hood And I just quit that shit, cause it wasnt all good Wasnt for me, knew it would get me in more trouble, see So I realized prevent it, no more bad shit happening to me But a month later I moved from Cali, ta my mothers crib in KC Tried ta realize some shit, I am just tryin ta face me But its hard here, most of the people here are my enemies My friends that I did have, they were turning on me Sometime when I moved to MO, I made contact wit my dad I knew him from before but, his working habits were bad Not by his choice, but because he dropped out around 3rd grade Personal reasons, now I visit him during the summertime in Dade |
uppin...........................................an y1
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i like this..pretty cool, nice flow, nice structure, relatively easy to read...7/10...RTF at any or all the links in my sig...holla
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This Was An Ight Peace Here Preety Nice Rhymes Flow Was Good Stayed On Topic Thorugh Out It All Nice Freestyle 7/10
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR IN MY OPEN MIC"BITTER PHOBIA" LINK IN MY SIG |
already rate biter phobia man, any more rates?
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up up and away.............................................. ...RATE THIS MUHFUCKAZ
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common muthafuckaz ratr this shit...........................
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