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Played Angel...Feat-InDeph and Two By Four
the good in my soul..fading to the brink of extinction..all my good will..traded.. into the link of deletion..we all bad..even when the evil is tedius..we think that way becuase of the media..its all in comparisin compared to herorin..weed is easy..when you narrow it..everyone knows..how to make a barrel fit..commen knowledge..isn't with a bonding father everyone's alone..in the world of modern..the rage collects and stress..explodes soon..like a hourding otter..sorry to slip a punchline in..that's not my style.. but you must comprehend..NWA..was the worst in there day..no more..G-unit spraying guns..and getting praise..it aint a phase..it will only grow worse.. its not like me..I gotten better since proverse the armegeddon will come..short of schedule.. its too late to change now..death is inevitable.. do you remember when...racist comments brung controversey..not nobody give a fuck..if a joke hurt me I gotta say..this shit happened a bit early..god damn even my little cousins..of 3 years old cursing..if its not cool to be coolheaded..then guess the played angelz got a new fetish.. -In Deph Tricked thoughts people think there still good, but just Aint I cant believe they don’t realize there bad, they make me Faint Don’t they make you ponder how they got from good to Wack The worst from what I seen, & to think there rhymes hit Intact Make me laugh, why don’t they wake up outta there dream Sleep Walk around and think how there rhymes became so down Deep Some people go and steal rhymes from others, what fuckin Creeps Go ahead ask me ill say there cowards stealing off different Peeps Shits played out to many people do it, it gets real fuckin Confusing It’s really the opposite of amusing, cuz people are afraid of Losing There record might show there bad, but that don’t mean there Crap They fall off rap, dream about being something else, get up off that Nap Rapverse, to many homies lookin for them rv dollars, its all a Waste Going from a vet to minor is the worst, damn that shits super Haste Your overrated for one reason, you said your rhymes were Misplaced I think your words weren’t written well to start with, you’re a Waste Trying to fit in is hard when you always steal rhymes from Others If they Came from yourself I would respect you in a way of Another When your thinking about bitin a topical off someone, first use Meditation First maybe you should go and find someone to help with your Elevation -2 X 4 |
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come on..........uppin
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nice!!
you both flowing good, good wordplay.structure's good. both stayed on tpic. Indeph I was feeling your verse a bit more than 2by4. but you both came dope. oh yeh, you two are the last I thought we would see a collab from. But the 2 style's went well together. |
weerd...yea we had a diffrent thing goin on InDpeh put tiem on vocab more then me thats prob why you feel his more or just becuz hes naterually better then me topical wise..:)
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Yea Like Fi-del Said Yall Had Wordplays Nice Flow And Good Struture Yall Good Nice
8/10 Put An Feedback In My Open Mic 2 By 4 And Indepth Put An Feedback Too In My Om Called " I Will Not Forget U" |
iight homie...........uppin...good looks to
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nice rhyme schemes both ya'll. feelin this one. First one flows nice and has some nice word play and structure, and second verse follows it up hard. good looks to both ya'll. keep droppin (now get it in audio!!!)
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lol weerd we both do audio so...iunno..
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