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Originality at its finest PEEP NOW
Bored had a concept and ran with it
You think you so fucking dope Drop your thoughts “Mankind” is a family for peace, yet there’s always Gotta-be-War-On** It’ll have ya like “Damn Kin!” We could say the word is an Oxymoron~** Spit rhymes in “Limerick’s” that make ya slip like Some-“Slick-Rime”* I practice it day and night, cuz that the only way I’m Gone-Get-Signed~ Dubbed a lyrical “Cabaret” in just “A-Bar-Etc.” just cuz I Flow-Hard* Plus I aint like “Actors” and ICEPICK’ll never be anyone’s “Co-Star”~* Ice's spit combine like “Sweltering Heat” and “The-Winter-Gales”* To confuse the shit out of you and prove that even Some-Winners-Fail~ “A Sentence of Death” “Faces one at the End” of my Acidic-Bombs* Rule with “Militarism” and mass arsenals while others “I-Limit-Arms”~* “I Won’t-Hear-Shit” from you even if I’m anywhere “Within-Earshot”* You gone die a sinner so you goin to hell but still not Livin-Near-Hot~ Kissin a man in gay acts the only point in time You-Tongue-Tied My crew’s “United” so battle us and we leave ya entire Crew-“Untied”~* Ya lyrics so basic and simplistic they define a specific “A-A-U-Term”** Didn’t know you was an “Amateur”, then for raps sake Take-A-U-Turn~** The letters in “Eric Clapton” moved around spell out Ya-Rhymes-Effect** They turned me into a “Narcoleptic” so often that now My-Mind’s-Inept~** “Alas, no more Zs”, cuz now ya spit’s equipped with a “Snooze-Alarm”* Because your mad were catchin Forty Winks off your Misuse-of-Songs~ Now I know Lately “The Eyes” ya have work fine because “They-See”* I guess you weren’t informed that They-See just fine until you Face-Me~ “Roast Turkey?” you should just “Try our Steak” cuz ICE-got-Beef* Cuz aint nobody on ya roster that’s better then me your all Payroll-Cocky~ Beef wit Ice and I’ll prove that ya “Had No Sole” like “An-Old-Shoe”* Rap wise I Am-Global, ya should’ve listened to what ya Man-Told-You~ What am I? Here’s a clue:“I Tap, I Slug” and I also know how the Future-Is** Waiting for prophecies to come to pass Through-This Futurist “Pugilist”~ ** You bout to “Exit-on-Cue”-From this life when I bring the “Execution”* “Fry A Lot” like “Frito Lay” and transmit bolts of heat in Electrocution~* Don’t be a “Sore Sport” in another way when ya loose like “Al Gore”* Ho But I guess ya gotta be and still gonna bitch even after ya Lost-in-Votes~ |
*=( Every time something is in Quotes on this piece it is because it’s a anagram which means in these lines if you rearrange the letters of the stuff I have in Quotations the one quotation part will spell out the other one as in “Eric Clapton” rearranged spells out “Narcoleptic” or as in “Damn Kin!” rearranged spells out “Mankind”)
**=( some of the anagrams happen in two lines like the first set of quotes happens in one line then the next set of quotes is in the next line) (Also the quotes in this piece are only for showing the anagrams to you they are not around my metas, similes or wordplay unless part of one of those anagrams is involved in the wordplay of course so you hafta pick all those aspects out yourself, so follow this piece carefully and closely) Just appreciate the originality of this piece aight but be honest as ever with the feedback |
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Yall Just Dont Undertsand Huh
What Ever Must Have Flew Ova Ya Head |
Ok Must Be Too Stupid To Unda Stand What A Anagram Is
True Herbs |
when i was reading this man i though tit was dope..then you had that explanation afterwards and it made it ten times better...this is an original concept man ....nice wisdom..
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Good Lookin Man
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Wow
People Must Not Get What Bein Original Is All About I Peeped And Replied And Get Slept On Cool |
i understood wut u were sayin...truly original, truly dope...shit was nasty...10/10...priginality, flow, wordplay, structure, multies, metas...everythang that needed to be there was there...plus much more...shit was ill as fuck...keep droppin sick shit like this...
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It isnt that hard 2 figure out nice way 2 play ball man....
Check it' Drinkin "redrum", Swearin You never would-hurt-her// Then your ass Felt dumb, Now u offline for "murder"// Havin U scream "I am greasy rag", amish like still in a carriage// Man U still sick as fuck, U voted YES on "Gay Marriages"// This anagram, shit "Is peckish mercy" And should be a crime// Anagram's are more-played than all of "Ice picks Rhymes"// Everything in "anagram" quotations is a anagram 2 the next bar |
Good Job
I Think This Was Dope Holla Wit Som Mo Feedback Please Word |
nice ice pick......ive seen this done before once...lol.not here though....
its a coo style n can deliver a nice message when done right... to be honest the only thing i did'nt like bout the drop was the anagram's controlled were the topic went but ya ohh well,nice job..think you did good...8/10 |
damn i ice this was dope...nice punchlines...decnt structure....pretty decent multies....
...and emotions...were pretty good...overall nice drop.... keep it up ps :damn 55-6 how the fuk you were 15-2 last time i saw you |
Cause I Battle When Ever I Can|
Once I Get A Certain Number Of Wins Text Will No Longer Be My Thing Havnt Set A Number Yet I Would Like A Win Against Anybody I Can |
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