Illmatic vs Life
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-05-05 at 07:06 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Life has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 07:07 PM.

yo who da fuck you calling a ladie, you da only bitch i see
your a fucking herb, no way you can even stack up to me

i'll have this nigga "whipped" like "miracle"(miracle whip)
over herbs, yeah thats how i roll

i'll have this nigga on his toes like girls in a ballet class
when you take a bath is the only time you get a sight of ass

tha only thing "ill" is my skills wth a "matic", i spray ten in a second
i hit you in tha face with all ten, turn your face into a moon crescent

your frightend, i know, im pretty scary
lol,you had no chance of winning like John Kerry

Illmatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-02-05 08:16 PM.

i guess you're right cause this shit really just begins
700 posts no losses and no wins
so i know you think you tough but if you charge me wrong
i'll rock this bitch like nelly and i don't make party songs
by the sounds of you, you should consider retirement dude
cause legacy has a better chance of being signed then you
well i'm just bein honest and he's on your level
i know you think that i'm an angel...but so was the devil
don't debate on whether i'm fake you just a wretch wait...no
cause if I miss you the first time i can just catch the late show
it's not just me dog everyone proly hates you
even if we don't say it these niggas just tolerate you
the only way this clown could cut is replace his mic with a knife
go try death cause you're Eclipsed Forever In Life (spells Life Backwards)

this space is so you can catch up

i was offered a two on two i knew my mono flo'd phase ya
you and your record both suffer from achonodroplasia
so that same shit you talk i'ma make you eat
So take ya eyes out and watch the way you speak
so this Lame's Indifferent Flo's Elapsed (spells Life)
His fans are "sub - 0" just like his raps

explanations
Legacy is his made up fighter on this sight
he's losing to the late show and is in a battle with sub-0 check it out (i'm so nice i'm promoting his battles)
Eclipsed forever in life - life is his name and the whole thing is life spelled backwards
his made up person's level is 1 and the devil was an angel who fell from heaven
Life challenged me with someone else at his side and someone said they'd help me do this 2-2 but i declined
Lame's indifferent flo's elaspsed - elapsed is over, indifferent is with no favor good or bad and the whole thing spells Life
Achonodroplasia is the most common form of dwarfism

Voted For: Illmatic

Illmatic: you had better flow and punches overall, better vocab too, but one thing, don't explain every punch you make, that's herbish.

Life: your verse is ok, but you need to work on your vocab and flow and structure.....and don't leave spaces between each bar, that's herbish.

Overall Illmatic completely owned life

Thanks for the feed back...still uppin for votes tho, lets wrap this one on up

This was feedback posted for Life
 

yo up this my main man illmatic get it how we live it nigga
AND CHECK YA BOY ON THERE... I'M DOING MY THING AGAIN

uppin///////////////////////////////////////////////

Voted For: Illmatic

yo this battle definately goes to illmatic...he killed u wit da personals and his punches were way harder...nuff said...<--(that reminds me of someone*scratches his head*)...lol

Voted For: Life

ight u've made a few changes & betta diverse on this battle good drop & if i could vote on this u would win

This was feedback posted for Illmatic
 

Voted For: Illmatic

Basically both of you came extremely wack.. both need to work on harder punches and better meta's. Illmatic had the better verse he had 2 or 3 decent punches while Life barely had 1 decent punch

work on structure illmatic cuz that fucked you up some and forget the explanations.. your lines should be so good and clear that no explanations are needed same for you life, forget the explanations. It makes your verse look worse and longer than it really is.

Basically Illmatic took this battle in every area except for structure but once again you both came extremely wack

Voted For: Illmatic

my vote is for immatic he killed that nigga
so i vote for the winner

Voted For: Illmatic

NOT A VERY STRONG BATTLE BUT ILLMATIC HAD A MUCH BETTER VERSE ALL AROUND RHYMES WERE NICE FLOW WAS GOOD STRUCTRE WAS A LIL OFF BUT IT STILL GOT THE JOB DONE
BEST LINE-by the sounds of you, you should consider retirement dude
cause legacy has a better chance of being signed then you
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR IN ONE OF MY OPEN MICS IN MY SIG PEACE