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11. Out Writechas (1-1) vs. 12. DiZzy (1-0)
G.B.A Gimmick Battle Association Celebrity Rapper Battles Pretend as if you ARE the rapper you have been assigned. Don't diss your opponent, diss your opponent's rapper. Bring out the personals and the heat. Good Luck. ============ Out Writechas as Jay-Z vs. DiZzy as Nas ============ Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific 10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = -2 Votes Swaying = DQ Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Wednesday Night New Battles Up Thursday Morning For Full Rules Click Here |
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 Old head back outta retirement,, you aint jordan my dood left the game for a minute,, but now your back wit bad taste you were on top of the game,, but now even he has a bigger fan base n you sayin YOU the best,, mann i cant stand this nigga only reason ya eaten more than otha rappers is cuz ya mouth is bigga rocawear aint sellin,, kids aint wearin that weak shit why would they wanna dress afta an old man tryna be hip yeh you came outta brooklyn but we no you fake.. whan the last time you seen a 45 was on ya birthday cake you even tried to get at jimmy when u remixed ballinnnnnnnnn hahahahahah,, but you n old ass nigga all u doin is baldinnnnnn i even had ya girll dogg,, yea i no its greezy just no im not sayin good bye. jay when i tell you B E Z |
i didnt have much time to write so i keyed somethin so hopefully you do the same n show my dood 1
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 time to get my grown man on im just curious mr. jones, whats it like bein in my shadow prolly the same feelin as when u lost the first battle new york is baffled, you turned bitch and now ya done dude how u a G, when u tat a girl on ya arm AND sign to the man who sonned you to graph your career, i would photocopy your right eyebrow cuz ya first album gave u light...then..then..completely wiped out Hip Hop Is Dead? the bitch ain't dead just cuz she want no part of you maybe your shocked someone ACTUALLY took your pic, or ya retarded to no need to thank me, Black Republican is and was a street hit but it's sad tho when papoose did a better job on your beat than you did and tell that bitch Kelis that i found her wedding ring so don't hate her Ether she wants that Big Pimpin, or for my boys to run The Takeover later IT'S YA BOI |
dam no votes? whats good
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yeh you came outta brooklyn but we no you fake..
whan the last time you seen a 45 was on ya birthday cake you even tried to get at jimmy when u remixed ballinnnnnnnnn hahahahahah,, but you n old ass nigga all u doin is baldinnnnnn these were good,the birthday cake was a creative concept V$ and tell that bitch Kelis that i found her wedding ring so don't hate her Ether she wants that Big Pimpin, or for my boys to run The Takeover later new york is baffled, you turned bitch and now ya done dude how u a G, when u tat a girl on ya arm AND sign to the man who sonned you these were aight,the takeover line was ya best IMO well this was a very close battle,but ima hafta give it to dizzy cuz he came a little better. \\// DiZzy |
left the game for a minute,, but now your back wit bad taste
you were on top of the game,, but now even he has a bigger fan base cool yeh you came outta brooklyn but we no you fake.. whan the last time you seen a 45 was on ya birthday cake vs and tell that bitch Kelis that i found her wedding ring so don't hate her Ether she wants that Big Pimpin, or for my boys to run The Takeover later close shit, both verses were inconsistant, I liked the quotes and nothing else really. Dizzy was a little more consistant. Out could've won if he executed some of his concepts better I think, but as it is I gotta give it to Dizzy v/ Dizzy |
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left the game for a minute,, but now your back wit bad taste you were on top of the game,, but now even he has a bigger fan base you even tried to get at jimmy when u remixed ballinnnnnnnnn hahahahahah,, but you n old ass nigga all u doin is baldinnnnnn out new york is baffled, you turned bitch and now ya done dude how u a G, when u tat a girl on ya arm AND sign to the man who sonned you i got dizzy winnin this. out had that one line that was simple but true. it hit. nothin else really. dizzy's 45 line was ok, the game line was ok. the baldin shit was roflz though. wasnt real creative or anything but it was witty as fuck. loved that line. gotta give it to him. v/ dizzy |
yeh you came outta brooklyn but we no you fake..
whan the last time you seen a 45 was on ya birthday cake vs. new york is baffled, you turned bitch and now ya done dude how u a G, when u tat a girl on ya arm AND sign to the man who sonned you Some close shit here. DiZzy had the line of the battle with that 45 line, surprised I ain't seen it, that was some funny shit. Out, that line i quoted was real talk, a nice personal. You had a lot of personals, but I felt most of them could have been executed with more wit. Just having personals isn't always enough, they gotta be funny too. DiZzy only had 1 line which I thought was quotable, but almost every line he had was at least average to decent. Out you had some stuff which was too simple/obvious like the opener and the line about taking his pic. I got DiZzy winning. Vote - DiZzy |
DiZzy wins 4-0.
DiZzy WINS 2-0 Out Writechas LOSES 1-2 |
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