ßŕ¡††ªñ¥ ..vs.. METAHphysiKz
 

10 lines
both drop verse 30-40 mins after checkin
g/l

Hey brittany, ur settin it up wrong. Glad ta see ya

30-40 mins? naw kiddie im finna post a quick reply ...
spit 10 lines .. 'bounce back'? how when i "split ya spine" ...2
stick to text ya dyke .. ima teach you your Left n' Rights ...
put HANDS ON YOU like Obie Trice .. strangle ya neck wit ties ...4
no punches from this broad .. thought she'd be more hands on ...
only time Brit 'pulls strings' is when she removes her "tampon" ...6
im urbans most jocked like Mitch N Ness .. go head spit ya best ...
id diss ya sex .. but cant tell cause ya chest got 8 year old breast ...8
no need to wish luck , your a cheap slut .. ya spits suck ...
id be contradicting if i called you 'TIGHT/ cause you just got "fist fucked" ...10

^^^nice name you have there buddy...

where you at brittany?

hey, I'm sorry, i guess i forgot about this battle...I'm willing to accept a disqualification and you win.., otherwise i can write something up right now..up to you.

write something up now and lets get some votes ... if you dont want to have a mod close this and give me the win

writing right now...

Whats this, your 4th post? Already start ta boast?/
Just call me yur tour guide, taking ya coast ta coast/
Check your mail METAHphysikz, a letter from Santa Clause/
Wondering when you and him goin back to METAHpause/ (womens metapause class..spelling?)
This wack ass boi try to dis me and it makes me laugh/
When my track record's longer than a DC-20 aircraft/
Lyrically I'm the di-wrecktor, like Steven Spielberg/
I spit nothing but the truth, and you aint even real-herb/
I know I came equipped, hope ya brought ya necklace cross/
Better start prayin, cuz once again you METAHnotha loss/


Ugh, you are really good Metah, i dont think im at that level yet..nice job, thanks for lettin me write...!!

brittany: your opener started out halfway decent, then you killed it with the second line, you should've gone with a punchline,instead of a like rhyme. you had a few decent punches..I was sort of feelin' the santa claus punch, the others almost lost meaning by the second half ..keep at you have potential.....your structure was good, each line flowed well into the next, there was a little problem with your sylable cout, but that was only a minor problem.you had a few nice metaphors, the aircraft line particuliarly stood out. you had some wordplay, you get props for that. your closer was umm ehh, to tell you the truth it was kinda dumb,but your new to this, so like I said kee practicin'.....

metahphysiks: your opener wasn't bad, your multiples worked well, but the whole broke, bent, snapped your spine punch is super played....your punches were really one-tracked, sexual punches are really amature in my opinion, but most of them hit hard, just try not to focus on that next time ayite...you had multiples spread throughout your verse, most were good, some weren't.....your structure was really good, making the whole verse easy to read..no metaphors here....no wordplay.........
your closer was just dirty...I winced afte I read it, but it was pretty good, also sort of humorous........keep it up both of you............

vote:metah
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114089
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112366
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113218

1-0 me uppin

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METAHphysiKz you got this battle i'll give it to you up me on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114150 please thanks you did i liked the punchs and ur lyrics ur really good!!

this girl brittiany her flew is cool and shit kicked this guys ass

they should keep raping they are good at it