Ace vs Young Smiff
 

10 lines max
no cheating
you spit first...
have some fun...
good luck..
check in first..
peACE

yo ill hit this up when u both spit

but in the mean time can u check out my battle........

its the one below in my sig

thanks alot...................

yo u battlin me is like a ant goin against god
betta yet a puttin a match 2 a cigar
u aint gon last comin aganst tha young 1 man
if u think u can win u gotta be a dumb 1 man
if u a ace of spade then im a king a clubs
outside wit a pump fixin 2 fill ya hole body wit slugs
i got a chrome that will slow ya thinkin down like drugs
or leave a hard stain on ya like kool-aid on rugs
so ace if u plan on winnin dis hand u betta have lady luck
cause i'm like a joker wit a full house homy wuts up

nice verse man, props, its gettin late i'll post later, don't worry
i won't pre-write........................don't have ta...............

peACE bro~

nice verse
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Good verse Young. I'll hit this up when Ace spits. Can yall check out this battle tho. Hit it up with an honest vote, or Young yo can review and critique if ya want. Peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91312

WHATTA DA YA MEAN THAT VERSE WAS SHITTTY YOU CAN TELL HES A NEWB IM NOT HATIN DO CAUSE HES REPRESENTIN THE
3 0 3 BUT COM ON MY SISTER CAN GIVE YOUR ASS A MERKIN ELEVATE DOGG AND HIT THIS UP WHILE YOUR AT IT:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=92127

aight im back..sorry for having to leave so soon...
nice verse..my turn..i'll go easy...

~Warm Up~

Squeeze-to-release, your mind is falling a bit short of stable//
Couldn't win this award if you were the author of this fable//
I've seen between the lines and they're more commendable than your words//
This YOUNG-in couldn't out-number my votes if they came in by thirds//
Press play, reverse, I'm going backwords and yet you're still behind//
I guess it wouldn't make much of a difference if I actually started trying//

~Drop~

Dismantle your corpse, I'm taking home your limbs to use as a souvenior//
Leaving behind your head as the only evidence to prove that you've been here//


I had to cut it a bit short...good luck

peACE

uppin..................
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peACE

Open- young
Metas - Ace
Creavitity - Ace
Personals - Ace
Flow - Ace
Finish - Ace
Dek's Abuse Meter- 8.5 for Ace, 5 for young

vote = ace

My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92298

Vote Ace

Every categorie cept Structure


Fix up that structure. This was one sided.

Ace hit this up "Honestly" bro

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92398



....oh and answer your pm's

thanx for the votes peepz..............
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......uppin again...........
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peACE

Punches:Ace
Flow Ace
Personal: Tie
Overall Ace
Cote Ace

Hit me Up i took the time.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91975

^thanx for the vote.............
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uppin this.....
peACE

Opener: Ace
Closer: Ace
Flow: Ace
Punches: Ace
Personals: Ace
Win: Ace

Can yall return the favor n vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92298