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Mjust23 And Str8 Hood West Coast Colab
Mjust23 And Str8 Hood Present
"cali Reppin" Verse 1(mjust23) Yo,this Cali, The Spot Were I Reside// Matter Whos Rappin We All Got Flow,thats Sometin U Cant Hide// Im The Lebron Of Rap, Oakland Throwback Fitted Black Hat// Bundled 3 Carts Of D-money In Ma Lap// Cali's Flow Is Hot From The Wood To The Bay// Me And Str8 Hood Got "cali Love" As The New Pac And Dre// This Song Is Deticated To Ma Cali Niggas// Us Rollin Up On 24's Countin 6 Figures// We Got The East,south And Midwest In A Pic Frame// Our Flow Is More Fitted Than Spike Lee At A Knick Game// The Punches Are Hot, More Heated Than Wen We Pop// Got More Rocks Than 50 Got Shot// Cali's Hot, Call Us Microwave Town// Appointed King Of Da Wood, Mack Pass Me The Crown// Flows Like Im Pitchen 5 And 0 At The Mound. Hook(2x) Wen Pop Rivals................u Cali Reppin Wen U C-walk Fo'life........u Cali Reppin Wen U Fuck A Bitch Everyday.........u Cali Reppin Wen U Got The West On Lock...........u Just Str8 And M Verse 2(str8 Hood) Wat State U From? Kid I Stay On The Best Side// Strapped Wit The Tek I Keep It Fresh On The West Side// Bay Area Vallejo To The Wood// I Used To Roll Wit E-40 And Them Clowns In The Hood// Mjust21 Picked Me Up To Do Some Work On This Collab Shyt// He Knew This Kid Could Flow Like Them Wrinkles On A Fat Chick// Im A Pimp I Leave Them Trix For The Kids// Got A Grip On That Dough I Gots To Rolls When I Dip// California Cats Got That Flow It Aint No Joke Its For Real// This Kid Is Spittin Lyrics So Sick Im Gettin Everybody Ill// Im Attacking The Other Sides Of The Globe Like An Assasian// Ready To Take U Out Like Jfk If U Actin// Up To Me Bow Down To The Kings// Cube And E Did It Before But We Back On The Scene. Hook(2x) Verse 3(mjust23) In Case U Didnt No, We Run This Game// Wen The West Spits, It Tends To Inflict Pain// East Coast Claims Gold But I Cant Even Remember Half They Names// Midwest Wit No Fire,all Flows Is Lame// South Is Still Fuckin Tryin To Garner Fame// I Dont Care If U Dont Like Us Cause We Still Gonna Rep That Name// Thats W-e-s-t In Ya Grill// We Consalt Fake Rappers Like Oprah Consalts Dr.phil// (str8 Hood) When U Feel The Flow Get Ya,u Know That The West Hit Ya// Wicked Shit Spittin Scriptures Like Jesus Be Down Wit Ya// All These East Coast Cats In Love Singin They Songs// Wen We Rappin This Game Aint Were These Fakers Belong// The South Doing Ok But They Style Smells Like My Buttcrack// Well Im Packin 9's These Fags Stay Getting They Fudge Packed// And U Know That We Both Sick Kinda Like Gray Rancid Fish// And The Way I Hold The Blade Will Have U Break Dancin Bitch |
mmmmmm....never gave feedback on an collab before...
Aight i thought it was nice....had a good flow to it...but i wasnt really likein tha hook...but overall it was decent...god work...i'd give it a 6/10 |
nice spit..i wasnt feelin da hook but overall u had a good flow and nice rhyme scheme,
We Got The East,south And Midwest In A Pic Frame// Our Flow Is More Fitted Than Spike Lee At A Knick Game// ^nice bar..liked da flow.. i give u a 7/10 on dat verse hit up da battle in my sig |
nice spit... i was feelin it pretty good.... not bad verse, this was your best line:
Bay Area Vallejo To The Wood// I Used To Roll Wit E-40 And Them Clowns In The Hood// Mjust21 Picked Me Up To Do Some Work On This Collab Shyt// He Knew This Kid Could Flow Like Them Wrinkles On A Fat Chick// nice... i give ya a 8 outta 10... not bad hommie |
This Was Nice Both Had Good flows Juss elan how 2 even yo linez out..Kinda fucked up yo verse but 8/10 Pretty niCe...
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come on yo. hit us wit more feedback
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It was ah'ight, rhymes was kinda basic, ya flow was on point tho an structure was tight but I did not like chorus at all, but it was a good concept jus could have been better lyrically.
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ok rhymes the flow was tight chorus was ok i give it a 7
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i'm feelin tha colab, da Wood and da Bay! i'm feelin tha chorus, nice hook and tha flows had a good structure to it.
i give it a sev-7 HOLLA |
it was pretty nice, i was feeln it, you both did a good job on that shyt, keep it up, Peace.
Rate=8 |
hmm....it was a pretty good collaboration to me but...........................
most of your lines weren't evened & not good syllable count 7/10. |
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