No Snitchin(No Talkin Remix)
 

No Snitchin, no Bitchin, no writtin, we shootin to kill
Ya Shit, ya bitch, ya whole fuckin click Nigga
Livin Legendz in the City, keep the auto's in the facinity
Ya want it, Ya got it,its whatever, we got it to give it
No Snitchin, no Bitchin, no writtin, we shootin to kill
Ya Shit, ya bitch, ya whole fuckin click Nigga
Black Acez in the City, keep the auto's in the facinity
Ya want it, Ya got it,its whatever, we got it to give it

(Verse 1 Young Dollar)

Let'me tell ya somethin....wit out me even talkin
Watch me do somethin.wit out me even fuckin walkin
Ya mad i rep two crews?..Man nigga fuck you
Homie got us bent...Thinkin Legendz duck you
Yall niggas claim gun play...wen ya dont own triggers
You would swear I was white..Da way Shawty own niggas
Let me tell ya niggas somethin....I dont fuck wit snitches
Alright.admit yall aint no virgins.yall jus some fucked bitches
Shawty dont make ya boi show ya how a dead body softin
And expect the unexpected to hit ya neck when da gun sparkin

(Chorus)

(Verse 2 Young Dollar)

Imma Bull Nigga...Yall definetly dont wanna pay da cost
9/10...if ya ride on me yall niggas gonna get knocked off
Why ya hustla nigga when ya mammy got ya ass spoiled
Quit fuckin nigga...before i drill ya ass like i was lookin for oil
Niggas cool if cops pull me...Dey know i wont spill the act
Watch me swallow da crack...pray to God it dont fuckn crack
Cuz if does...5.0 will leave me right there..windows up in da lacc
5 o'clock in the mornin...still right there reclined on my fuckin back
But niggas dont worry ya ass....its just another alternate ending
My pockets clearly phat fat...........so ya niggas know im winnin
Yall niggas...like Imma sell...when clearly yall boiz like sike hoe
While in any scenario......Im well known as a muthafuckin phyco
Bitch talk trash...Cuz all i hear yall askin is... "Dollar where knife go?"

(Chorus)

(Verse 3 Young Dollar)

If ya dont belive me....best beleive yall aint harmin me
Cuz down here...Trunks iz better known as armories
Cuz I rock blue N bang wit crips,dont mean im crip walkin
I got somethin in my drawes...N I aint talkin shit markins
Fuck witta Ace on Blunt...Dats known as fuckin Stunt
And naw i dont talk all that 100 Guns 100 clips York stuff
Gimme one aimed nicely 1Gun 1 Clip...niggas thats enuff
Nigga imma assassin..so bitches go ahead call yaself King
Ya Sleep, I creep, merk ya ass N da blade up off ya pinky ring
Shout out Livin Legendz...Make sure u dont fuck Black Acez
Shoot ya ass in ya smirk....Call yall hoe niggas Claped Facez



(Chorus to the end) Talkin: hahahahhaha Yall niggas cant fuck wit Livin Legendz on da site And in Da street Niggas....N da street...Yalls niggas aint seein Black Acez nigga...We out

this was gangsta right here....no doubt good multis up on vocab structure was tight, so i got a good flow.....keep writtin keep elevatin nice job man sweet shit....rtf pleases peace

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OM link right dere^^^ and preciate the feed back homie

uppin dis man...dont sleep on it

This piece has an easy going flow..content was decent...vocab was mediocre...hook can be catchy if heard enough times..this would be a good track if you get ya elements straight in audio...

Only flaws I can see is..the fact that toward the end..you kinda strayed off the topic..didn't really seem like you were talkin about 'no snitchin'..plus ya repetitive use of 'nigga' & guns really took away from its potency

Overall, this was a good piece..only thing I can say to improve on..is creativity & vocab to intensify ya content..Not tryin to knock ya..just letting ya know my opinion..anyways, keep doing what you do

yall got on that gutta gutta shit right here, i was feelin the title and the topic of the song alot. niggaz need to sotp snitchin around here. but the hook coulda used some work, that joint was decen tho. first verse was ok, second one was hte best in my opinion.

my fav bar -While in any scenario......Im well known as a muthafuckin phyco
Bitch talk trash...Cuz all i hear yall askin is... "Dollar where knife go?"
^that joint was hot

other than that just work on ya flows a lil more
return the favor

uppin this for da last time till i get back

deff. a gangsta piece, felt that concept.....GOOD FLOW...up on vocab a bit.....multis was tight im feelin this 8/10...keep it up and rtf on my battle cuz i dont got o/m's

Staight on the point dawg....loving the the parts with LL.....a good concept....nice multi's.The only thing was the vocab which needs to be uped a tiny bit!!!!

7.5/10

uppin again since im bavck n aoreciate the feed i'll rtf real soon

ok i didnt like the chorus cus it didnt seem to flow to me but ya verse was hott as hell i liked the 2nd verse the best tho
Imma Bull Nigga...Yall definetly dont wanna pay da cost
9/10...if ya ride on me yall niggas gonna get knocked off
Why ya hustla nigga when ya mammy got ya ass spoiled
Quit fuckin nigga...before i drill ya ass like i was lookin for oil
^^^those were mah favorite line
good way of makin a gangsta peice n makin it seem believable you prolly live dis shit erryday ill give it a 8.5/10

uppin................ODnt sleep on dis mayne

I know you aint talkin that Sin'cere diss wasnt even all that good....shit kinda sucked in my openion..but anyways shawty fuck watcha say other people say da shit is hot....niggas at da studio said da audio to the shit was off da chain...niggas from my school said da shit was nice.....niggas dat hate me gave me props.....Nigga you like da definition of a hater anyways I aint sweatin ya homie....go ahead and keep bottom feedin off of Sin'cere's sig and shit