Ramcees ( 2 ) vs. LPMNDCTE ( 0 )
 

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You’ve advanced thus far but u'll get your ass kicked in a nerdy brawl
u produced a streak so shitty it'll show brown marks n dirty draws
& that aint all...bitch...ur just a pion, so I aint gonna try son
dam right Ramcees' fear...cuz he's looking dead on at a lion
get ur facts straight fucker, I bag chicks...u aint got none at all
cuz your never doing a dime, unless its behind prison walls
so get mauled, mangled...if this youth wants to talk tough
I'll throw ten-to-twelve at ya...^^^aka the age of girls u fuck
try to zero n with the punches, cuz u'll never hit perfection
throwing so many haymakers...I'd swear you caught yeast infection

kid aint fit enough to take me, so ill be quick to knock diz herb out
cuz jumpin to conclusions, closest diz Jerks ever been to a work out
another wack bitch, Fear man…im tired of battling these Faggots
this kidz verse boasts a bigger emergency sign, then Swedish Flag does
Im known for cutting mc’s in half, but this bitch made it very clear
That when I asked for an opponent……..all I got was a Volunteer
S’how u gona get to my level kid? ull need, blast off, and a Rocket
then ull surely make an impact on RV, cuz im pushin u back off of it
shit I didn’t even have to show up, so best u consult to that saddle
cuz ur verse was the sole reason… I Just WON this fuckin battle!

g/l bro

Pretty decent battle. LP, most of your lines were okay but would have hit harder if they were worded or used differently. I thought the 10 to 12 line was funny though. But also could have been said better.

Ram, you're verse was pretty good. Kept me readin'. The whole thing was consistent and your punches hit harder. I didn't like the closer that much though. But I thought the swedish flag line was funny.

My vote is for Ramcees, punches hit harder and he was more consistent.

You’ve advanced thus far but u'll get your ass kicked in a nerdy brawl
u produced a streak so shitty it'll show brown marks n dirty draws
na.
& that aint all...bitch...ur just a pion, so I aint gonna try son
dam right Ramcees' fear...cuz he's looking dead on at a lion
ok np.
get ur facts straight fucker, I bag chicks...u aint got none at all
cuz your never doing a dime, unless its behind prison walls
eh.
so get mauled, mangled...if this youth wants to talk tough
I'll throw ten-to-twelve at ya...^^^aka the age of girls u fuck
lmao.
try to zero n with the punches, cuz u'll never hit perfection
throwing so many haymakers...I'd swear you caught yeast infection
k.

vs

kid aint fit enough to take me, so ill be quick to knock diz herb out
cuz jumpin to conclusions, closest diz Jerks ever been to a work out
eh.
another wack bitch, Fear man…im tired of battling these Faggots
this kidz verse boasts a bigger emergency sign, then Swedish Flag does
rofl.
Im known for cutting mc’s in half, but this bitch made it very clear
That when I asked for an opponent……..all I got was a Volunteer
k.
S’how u gona get to my level kid? ull need, blast off, and a Rocket
then ull surely make an impact on RV, cuz im pushin u back off of it
decent.
shit I didn’t even have to show up, so best u consult to that saddle
cuz ur verse was the sole reason… I Just WON this fuckin battle!
na.

This actually was real close. It came down to quotables. I just feel Rams were a lil harsher n creative n he came slightly more consistent. Good showing from both of you guys.

v/ Ram

v/ ramcees, for consistency, and better punches... honestly i thought the starting of lmp's verse were kinda trash, had some decent ones at the end, but it wasn't enough...

another wack bitch, Fear man…im tired of battling these Faggots
this kidz verse boasts a bigger emergency sign, then Swedish Flag does

probly the best line in the battle, hopefully some promise next week from both, not bad of a read though

You’ve advanced thus far but u'll get your ass kicked in a nerdy brawl
u produced a streak so shitty it'll show brown marks n dirty draws
lol funny
& that aint all...bitch...ur just a pion, so I aint gonna try son
dam right Ramcees' fear...cuz he's looking dead on at a lion
wordplay was there but the punch wasnt
get ur facts straight fucker, I bag chicks...u aint got none at all
cuz your never doing a dime, unless its behind prison walls
eh this was worded weird i thought. punch missed
so get mauled, mangled...if this youth wants to talk tough
I'll throw ten-to-twelve at ya...^^^aka the age of girls u fuck
not bad
try to zero n with the punches, cuz u'll never hit perfection
throwing so many haymakers...I'd swear you caught yeast infection
not feelin

kid aint fit enough to take me, so ill be quick to knock diz herb out
cuz jumpin to conclusions, closest diz Jerks ever been to a work out
really played
another wack bitch, Fear man…im tired of battling these Faggots
this kidz verse boasts a bigger emergency sign, then Swedish Flag does
you mean the switzerland flag. woulda been decent if you'd put the right country
Im known for cutting mc’s in half, but this bitch made it very clear
That when I asked for an opponent……..all I got was a Volunteer
not really feelin this
S’how u gona get to my level kid? ull need, blast off, and a Rocket
then ull surely make an impact on RV, cuz im pushin u back off of it
wordings weird on this. cant quite see what you're goin for
shit I didn’t even have to show up, so best u consult to that saddle
cuz ur verse was the sole reason… I Just WON this fuckin battle!
kinda self depreciating

ramcees woulda had the lotb with the flag line, but he put the wrong country. lpm had a couple of decent lines, the opener n the ten to twelve lines were decent. i thought he got it due to those lines

v/ LPMNDCTE