Breathe Eazy King Kong Remix
 

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1rst - E.Millz
2nd - Past Tense
3rd - Swagga Boi
4th - Akeem "The Conscious"


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beat is cool..that voice is annoying.

1st dude - vocals are a little low..dont like his voice. kinda sounds annoying and monotonous. flow is cool though and it works for this beat. didnt really fall off. delivery was cool.

empty space is weird. and its too long with nothing there. at least introduce yourself

2nd verse - got a little more swag than first dude..quality sounds like you kinda fell off a little. i dont get it though. first youre a christian rapper and then youre not and then you are again? not too sure whats up with you..

empty space again..kinda sucks cause it makes me wanna turn it off

3rd verse - swagga boi? thats a pretty funny name..dont like this dude as much as the first 2. lyrically nothing special. rhyme scheme is real basic.

4th verse - like this dudes delivery and everything most..lyrically its nothing that really stood out. but he jus sounds better with this beat than everyone else. a few lines sound a little rushed though



maybe the outro have some talkin or something..the hook sounds real empty. wish yall woulda came with more energy on the whole track.

no way you can top the opening line from the real song....lets see.....?
nope.....
first guy had a pretty good flow not enough emotion somepoints...and a lame closing line but pretty good presence tho....not too bad lets see how you come in...
eh, you had good swager on this shit...but your verse was a lil off topic a bit...but you did good with it...needs some adlibs to keep it intresting kinda lulls you a lil bit...lets see ya other dudes...
ouch...cockpit line....really? i think i heard that one in mainstream already...means your a lil late on that one....BUt same thing as past tense...not bad just nothing to keep me intrested in it all verse long....
3rd guy tried to get a complicated rhyme scheme with this...not that type of song....not too bad, i liked the first guy the best imo....but nothing as good as "ay yo this beat is bananas" this one i have to chop up to the mainstream....get more hype like they did...

rtf on good morning

3rd dude, i think got the cockiest flow... 4th lil grimmier, like that, seemed short though, needed to switch up the flow.
past- decent first bar. like the more switchin up flow, catchiest i think, ended a lil quiet though.

thanks for the feed uppin

1st bruv...i like his style, the singin kinda flow...flows soundin kl, needs EQin betta still, sounds a bit too hollow too...but its live...kl verse

2nd breh...PAST! i aint heard u in time breh u kl??? soundin sik, qualitys a bit hollow i rememba u havin betta quality, flows nice, feelin it! like the bang bang ba bang....the way u split it

3rd...his voice is ill, hollow quality again, need to take some MIDS out imo...kl verse in end, flows nice still...deliverys kl...keep up

4....like his verse, his swagger sounds sik...flows gd, deliverys nicce as hell...lyrics r kl, overall a gd verse

Trak soundin good n ting, keep up

i dont like the beat wtf at king kong lol ight first dude is up his flow is coo...i like his delivery...lyrics is coo i jus wish you upped ur emotion a lil other than that it was cool....
WTF @ king Kong not feelin the hook.....
next dude his flow is aight he more swagger than the first dude...lyrics is coo....i like ur flow shits coo...you sound way layed back......
Hook=you already know what i think lol
next dude...his flow reminds me of young rooky....ur flow is coo i like that shit
lyrics was ight...gud shit....
next dude....ur voice is coo but sounds like a lot of rappers.....flow is ight....lyrics is cool nice drop.....overall this was coo keep doin ur thang =1=