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Civil. 02-23-09 05:28 PM

Heavy Weight Title Match: Adam 5-0 .vs Coke Dealer 5-1
 
Sunday Night: Battles are set up
Wednesday: Adam 1 bar
Thursday: Coke Dealer 2 bars
Friday: Adam 1 bar
Sunday: Battles Close

Feeding is allowed and will be optional

Cola 02-23-09 05:35 PM

Cool .

Adam 02-23-09 06:55 PM

Coke Dealer couldn't rap dope with zig zags.

Just kidding pal, check. :cool:

Adam 02-25-09 02:28 PM

Coke can try and hit me, but I bet I'll bust him and he chokes,
'Cause I've always Won-21, Dealer just gives BJ's out for votes.

Cola 02-25-09 03:36 PM

After this, i'll make em Mad, Eh. We know Canada is just 'backwards'
N the direction of your bars so 'bull'shit, you just becomin a Cow Ward
Real dopeness, look at the siggy you always second place to them
Must be a queer, the way he always claming he the Champ in Men

Mad, Eh is Mad, A..which is Adam backwards


i'm sure no one will get my punches either way. rofl

Adam 02-27-09 11:50 PM

You're trying to hard to be clever, no girls are gonna dig that sound,
'Cause the only chicks that swallow Coke usually weigh 300 pounds.

Cola 02-28-09 12:00 AM

fuck, i shouldn't have changed my siggy so soon

rofl

one way 02-28-09 09:32 AM

Coke can try and hit me, but I bet I'll bust him and he chokes,
'Cause I've always Won-21, Dealer just gives BJ's out for votes.
ok wording is iffy

After this, i'll make em Mad, Eh. We know Canada is just 'backwards'
N the direction of your bars so 'bull'shit, you just becomin a Cow Ward
wording was bad, concept was ok
Real dopeness, look at the siggy you always second place to them
Must be a queer, the way he always claming he the Champ in Men
wasn't feeling it


You're trying to hard to be clever, no girls are gonna dig that sound,
'Cause the only chicks that swallow Coke usually weigh 300 pounds.
ok again but could have been stronger



pretty week battle gunna say ADAM for the first line, both you need to worko on wording for more effect

Adam 02-28-09 12:05 PM

^ I'm talking about Coca-Cola bro, not cocaine, s'all good, thanks for the vote.

one way 02-28-09 12:31 PM

true .

SnoCap 02-28-09 12:36 PM

Coke can try and hit me, but I bet I'll bust him and he chokes,
'Cause I've always Won-21, Dealer just gives BJ's out for votes.
Eh, weak to say the least... this isnt even a punchline, it seems like a one line filler. Gay disses aren't funny/hard hitting.

After this, i'll make em Mad, Eh. We know Canada is just 'backwards'
N the direction of your bars so 'bull'shit, you just becomin a Cow Ward
good concept and wordplay but the delivery was off.
Real dopeness, look at the siggy you always second place to them
Must be a queer, the way he always claming he the Champ in Men
maybe its just me but... i dont get it. poor delivery.


You're trying to hard to be clever, no girls are gonna dig that sound,
'Cause the only chicks that swallow Coke usually weigh 300 pounds.
wasn't feeling this, played played played.

This was a weak battle but i'm going to say COke for originality... didnt see too much originality from adam here,

vote: coke

Adam 02-28-09 12:47 PM

Lmfao, my first punch is so over your head it isn't even funny.

Civil. 02-28-09 01:10 PM

v/adam

coke came too forced. concepts really werent that harsh either.
too simple and wording wasnt good.

adam i thought you first punch was dope. 2nd not as much

02-28-09 01:15 PM

yeah im gonna have 2 vote adam for his second bar and that's it. sorry for not breaking it down but y'all know I don't d/r

actually you wouldn't be able to tell 'cuz I don't think I've voted against adam yet lol

Cola 02-28-09 04:50 PM

god damn it

fuck you adam


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