PayDay vs Kwell
 

Battle Rules:

5 Barz - 10 Linez
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No half ass votes, they must be explained WELL...

aight...Godd luck mayn...~1~

Minimum posts to vote: 75

Check in by: 10-23-04 at 08:58 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

PayDay has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 08:59 PM.

Kwell has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-20-04 09:26 PM.

i'ma jus key somethin now...

It damn sure aint hard ta' tell this is one of RV's shadiest geeks
n wit these lyrical shots,
..............i've got the kinda arms that'll rock this baby ta' sleep
u crazy ta' see a win in your future, son........foo it's impossible
ya too stupid...u wouldn't have IQ if i played pool wit ya opticals
i'm eludin this obstacle...u've been slow since the damn beginnin
yo, like mute people at sports events...u've got no chants of winnin
i already demoralized u dawg...now u better off steppin in stealth
u the laughing stock of RV, n it's bout time that u invest in yourself
i didnt wanna stoop to this dude's level, cuz thats a loss of respect
but next time PayDay comes thru, i already know i've got him in check...

Ha – Ha – Ha…Aight - Aight…its been a while…but ay’ Yo’ – Check it…

Punishment is painful when you know you deserve it// 1
It's like a hustla on a clucka ~ let me show you how I serve it// 2

You Already Know I defeat the room// 3
Then I be all over your girlfriend like some Cheap Perfume// 4

Kwell I pull more strings than 10 guitars// 5
and I will leave u dumped in the dumpster wit More than just Scars// 6

I’ll Stab n’ Lynch you with a Pad n’ Pencil// 7
A Lyrical god ~ I got mad skillz but you don’t even Have Potential// 8

PayDay is a Rappin Monsta ~ like the sopranos I’m a mobsta// 9
I Have you eatin shells n’ I aint talking bout Crabs n’ Lobstas// 10


Clucka – Slang for hoe, or prostitute
Menace – marlon waynes (don’t be a menace in southcentral)

Voted For: PayDay

nice battle Pay and Kwell...it could have been better if you both came harder...lmao...no hate...n e ways...PayDay took this...he had better flow, his punches and lines werent overplayed, and his structure was spactacular...i liked the lines he used as well...i havent heard n e one use marlon waynes in a diss before...he did that well...and a clucka? never heard of that but it fits the meaing i spose...lines 5 and 6 were good...pulling more striings than 10 guitars is a creative line...and he ender the bar with ~ "and I will leave u dumped in the dumpster wit More than just Scars" ~ a good ender to that but it could have been said a little bit more effective...okay...kwell...you are obviously new to the game...but u do have some tallent...first...your structure was horrible...it was choppy and overplayed...you did have some good lines but they were weak...in the rules it says 5 bars...you have a little bit more than that if you were to structure it the way it should flow...you have to get that str8 cause some cats will have u dq for not following the rules...both of you had good vocab as well, it was good...kwell you very last line was the best line..."but next time PayDay comes thru, i already know i've got him in check"...that is a good one...its not real hard or creative but most peeps would over look his name...props...okay to the voting...PayDay takes this with better vocab, flow, punches, creativity and STRUCTURE...

aight, very good feedback....jus lettin u know i aint "new to the game" as u said...n i knew that there was a 10 line limit, it's jus that the second line had a pause in it, n i didnt want that line to be extra long...anyways good vote....uppin for more...

yup yup...thanks for the good vote lyrikal...and i personally dont care how many lines he got...as long has he meets the minimum...any ways...still uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin for them votes...~1~

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppinnn nnn for votes

still uppin for votes people, i need to get this shit closed...dont let this sleep

Voted For: PayDay

In my eyes, Kwell only had one decent punch...his closer...and it still wasnt that great...Payday came way harder and had good punches throughout his verse...both flowed well, but Payday came harder with the good wordplay and punches. Good battle though y'all

thanks for the vote magik...still upppppppppppppin for them votes...dont let this sleep

This was feedback posted for PayDay
 

cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here!

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come one people...lets get this closed...uppppppppin