In Your Arms
 

First song for the new cd me and my boi are doing

its called "revolution" we went to the studio yesterday and recorded this.....

We recorded on an analog recorder 8 track. It took forever but hey it was a great experience and were going to use this studio more maybe. We want to know what you think of the song and if you think the quality is solid enough for a cd.

Intro:me/untamed
hook:me/untamed
verse 1:untamed
hook:me/untamed
verse 2:me
hook:me/untamed
bridge:me/untamed

no outro

I think i sound WAYYY Differn't on this.....so word


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5071273


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Song is aight to me..

beat ive heard a few times, soul theory right?..

erm im not in the mood to feed but illt ell y'all this quality was def not studio worthy...y'all got a waste of money there, was there an engineer there?..

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next time make sure u have 1, and u get all the bits n pieces on a cd, listen in ure cd player inside the studio...so u can tell the quality cos studio speakers can make most average quality sound hot..

cos you're home mixing PT is better than that 1

beat is slick

ur flow on it worked, but you rode the down beat...which gives it a jerky sound...ride the up-beat and see how that sounds


vibe is cool


7/10 track

RTF please



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lol we only payed 20 bucks....iono i think this quality is a tad bit better than mine....but word thanks for the feed....

I'm likin the hook yall did together, very smooth and yall work well together. Beats pretty ill...Untamed is pretty coo nice delivery. Your flow is pretty smooth I'm feelin it duke. I def like ya lyrics, on that real talk tip. Past tense ya did pretty good too, your also on that real talk. Your lyrics def good, flow is pretty smooth and you kept it strong. And word a nice finish to this track, I wanna download it but yall gotta do that and not make it downloadable...lol

will rt here yo: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...712#post3148712

beat is real cool..im likin it

chorus...sounds like you rushed the last 2 lines. lyrics are cool but im not sure if its catchy enough..

verse 1 - not feelin dudes voice..he sounds a lot different from the last time i heard him..lyrics are cool. nothing really special that stood out but it was cool

chorus is the same

verse 2 - your voice sounds strange..lyrics were decent so thats cool. flow was somewhat the same throughout so it got kinda repetetive..


nothing special about this song..lyrically i think untamed came better...but your voice is a lot more bearable than his...keep doing what you doing