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~Luciano~ 11-16-04 04:12 PM

Vet?
 
put asteriks on ya name only way u be no.1 rv
see my name an u consumed in greed an ^ look wit no period is what u be
small font fits u all ya lines aint really noticed or read
tryna shine off ya lyrics should just let ya s curl grease do it instead

just try kidnapins its gonna be the only way u ever ran-som people
could own u bilingual puta...
...but slaverys illegal an yet still nobodys around u tryna mingle*
life pass before your eyes when ya electricity blacks out
never a ridah just a hitchhika in a bus stop only time u in a glass house*

..........

Nos u can delete this when u want
but those lyrics 2 me are not one of a Real Vet
so stop wit all tha hes so sick shit..them punches dont even rhyme
RV AND BE......oUT AND HOuse

So i see u can jus write anybull shit these dayz
and still get respect

LoL shit cracks me up

headgames 11-16-04 04:17 PM

RV and Be rhyme, but the other dont

Sik Wit It 11-16-04 04:29 PM

^yea hes right.. rv & be rhyme tho..
but out & house...:wtf:

..no

...

~Luciano~ 11-16-04 05:18 PM

Yea then explain 2 me how Looch is gettin votes off that sorry ass shit

For$akeN 11-16-04 05:19 PM

troop to be honest his verse was much better than yours

so who cares anyways?

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-16-04 05:20 PM

blackouts........glasshouse< there spit in multi syllables..the OU in them do rhyme
.
its stretchin normal text...but in my eyes it works...

distilled 11-16-04 05:21 PM

Thats wack.......

Didnt Looch leave already........

anxiety 11-16-04 05:21 PM

That battle is still open... This is swaying...

Ca'lam 11-16-04 05:22 PM

lol.... -_- troop i love you... but im the honest guy... out and house do rhyme.. say black...out


glass...house.

thats shit emeinem does -_-... sounds just liek eminem to me.. but i still think troop owns text ;)..

¤ÐÅž¤ 11-16-04 05:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*
Yea then explain 2 me how Looch is gettin votes off that sorry ass shit

troop we koo n all, but you came with played recycled punches< some..
thats most likely why you aint gettin votes dawg.....
i agree with ya on the fact that i dont think hes
the best on site but he had a better verse in that battle....

Know-Gimix 11-16-04 05:35 PM

hmmm.... i dunno If the lines are that bad, but im not sure their spectacular either... eitherway dont go gettin urself dq'd now....

Platinum 11-16-04 05:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*
Yea then explain 2 me how Looch is gettin votes off that sorry ass shit

Because he has rideable dick.
I wanna battle E Looch and son that bitch.
Pz.

E Looch 11-16-04 05:42 PM

your desperate clown i win u lose

Platinum 11-16-04 05:46 PM

Lets battle E Looch.
Under my real name though.
Pz.

E Looch 11-16-04 05:47 PM

let me even this up though :thumbup:

should listen to daz and calamity and quit changin 1 word on a letter to rhyme how simple is that?


Hault to all Cornish Ambitions Testify to your Truths Please Mr E Looch
Ya "Financial Income" comes From Vaginal Devouring it should be E Mooch
Technique never Duplicated,Cus Pussified Thread Duckers isnt in Preference
Strobe Pm'd me with Rv's Best of All time Vets And Looch wasent in Reference
Your Dna Cells Recognize your Falseness why is your BloodPressure187
Ya Perpetrateing Respected Veteran U look up 2 me like Ten Viewin Eleven
You Never Developed your Cash Collecting Tactics so your still on the Grind
Looch is never Heard Like Mimes No wonder hes a "Legend in his Own Mind"
One last Reminder stop with your Recycled Lyrics they are well Past Expirement
This Records as your 3rd Loss so Finally now you can go into Retirement

1st. my anme doesnt rhyme with mooch my name isnt louch clown
2nd.show me where strobe pmd u that? and i dont duck nothin
3rd. i dont look up to u who actually does?
4th.i never retired
5th. u rycled that mime line and who uses mime lines still?


heres some hints for u though

big vocab doesnt get u wins and changin 1 letter to rhyme is simple stop doin that and all your similies are old and played out son

listen kid


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