RapVerse.com Community - Pool Of Doubt

i wrote thys poem a while back...lemme know what ya'll think...
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sometimes life gets tight,
and i feel like i can’t make it through the night,
i worry about the things to come,
where will you be and how far from me?
is she really what you need,
or is it true what they say...
love is blind,
i feel like i’m gonna lose my mind,
sometimes i think of ways to get out,
i am full of rage and doubt.
this is what is sounds like when my emotions take control,
i feel as if i’m in a deep, dark hole,
i can’t get out,
and i’m screaming for someone to help,
but yet and still no-one is there,
no-one cares,
i am here, and you are there,
i stand in front of the mirror and stare,
i feel like i can’t stand on my on two feet,
i can’t make it alone,
why can’t you realize,
that with me you had a home?
you always had somewhere to go,
you always knew that i would show,
show you that i care,
and that i would always be there...
for you,
everything has came unglued,
my emotions,
my actions,
and everything i am,
its been to long since i could look at myself straight,
i remember just the way you smell,
and all the sweet lil things you would tell,
but i guess love takes it courses,
and love has driven me insane,
i lay in bed, and call out your name,
but no-one answers anymore,
you should not have walked out the door,
because when you did,
all my feelings hit the floor,
i am swimming in a pool of doubt,
and i don’t know how to get out.