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Dirty Nigga 03-05-05 06:11 PM

onestepbeyond vs Buck.Shot
 
Battle Rules:

12 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Buck cant be dq'ed for having more than 5 open battles

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 03-05-05 at 06:41 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 03-05-05 06:15 PM

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-05 06:15 PM.

System 03-05-05 06:21 PM

Buck.Shot has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-05 06:21 PM.

Dirty Nigga 03-05-05 06:26 PM

Kid thinks he owns Open Mic, his rhymes dont Shine
He gotta have people featurin ta make up for his Lines
Bitch just Whines, he even left NOK when things got Tough
Mark ya chest with 'X' an the 'kiss' of Death if you wanna play 'Ruff'
Enough is Enough, the sites Tired of the 'Queens'
'NOK YOURSELF OUT'...Yea by all Means
Be my Guest, cause your Lyrically Blessed?
Thats like sayin.........
............Bazooka shots wont hurt cause ya wearin a ''Vest''
You'll never be above the Rest...
Ya raps bore, theres just no Anticipation
Propped you up with a Suspension, an still no Elevation
I dont know what ya thinkin trynna call out a Real KING
You wouldn't own the 'Block' if ya name was Yao Ming!
go 'head n do ya thing, lemme see the played out Flow
its talent you lack son, ya whack son...
.......i'd still get the fuckin win if i was ta no Show!

Explanations:
Opener, NOK think they own Open mic Forum
Next bar:- he ran out on NOK because they had beef, an there the only explanations

Kirk 03-05-05 06:34 PM

your beef was over before it started


stop tryna act so hard... stop beefin cause they're not jealous,
why's your name buck.shot? when lyrically your like air soft pellets,
i don't dislike you, and buck.shot im not threatening dude,
im just sayin you got 4,000 posts and im better than you,
its about fuckin time i ended this, start punchin lines,
you'd have to drop 5 open mics even to equal one of mine,
look at your record... every loss i bet you're heard cursin,
son you could get beat by a dude that speaks in 3rd person,*
you was in NOK, then got pissed, then dropped your rep,
thinkin your dead hott, but the case is you'll be shot to death,
grabbin the shotty... and im bout real to ill ya health,
so the morgues tellin the newspaper, you killed yaself..**

*tony green could beat him and he speaks in the 3rd person
**shottys shot buck.shots... get it?

Dirty Nigga 03-05-05 08:55 PM

Uppin this........................................

Dirty Nigga 03-06-05 09:26 AM

Upp
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Dirty Nigga 03-06-05 03:27 PM

Upping this.......................................

High-Dro 03-06-05 03:56 PM

Voted For: Buck.Shot

Buck.Shot - i liked ur flow, sum were kinda stretched but that was ok cuz u had some nice personals and had dope punches
"Thats like sayin.........
............Bazooka shots wont hurt cause ya wearin a ''Vest''"
i liked that...it just stood out to me...like i said sum coulda flowed better that was the only thing i could find wrong with it

OneStepBeyond - ur flow was good and you had some nice personal shit thrown at him in there...but, ur punches didn't really hit that hard so nuthin really stuck out..work on ur punches and u'll be kool homie

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Dirty Nigga 03-06-05 05:48 PM

Uppin this........................................

Big City 03-06-05 05:55 PM

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 
checkin polls ight drops from both...............

Dirty Nigga 03-07-05 07:27 AM

Uppin this y'all..........................
Crunk crunk

Dirty Nigga 03-08-05 12:19 PM

Up[pin this here y'all............................

Sten. Cell 03-08-05 12:52 PM

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Ok Battle But Im Goin With OneStep On This.HIs Punches Where Jus A Little Bit Stronger And His Personals His Closer To Home.Buck Started Out Ok But Got Weaker Towards The End.Also His Verse Was A Lil Sloppy Cause His Bars Were Uneven.Some Shorter Then Others.


Also Using Periods Jus So One Line Isnt A Run-On...........
...................Is Gay

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Kirk 03-08-05 07:54 PM

............uppin.......... should be a close battle...


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