**FLEx** vs DV8
 

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Check in by: 08-04-04 at 11:30 PM

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DV8 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 11:03 PM.

**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 11:03 PM.

I'm a simple person who accepts a simple culture//
so i'll leave you out to dry and deal with the vultures//
they call me the farmer cuz i harvest girls like agriculture/

You stepped up to the plate and that i respect//
except you'll strike out and go back on deck//
you'd better protect your neck, you'd be wrecked//
ill professionally inspect and intersect this direct peck//
it'll only take a sec.//

you're so full of hot air it must be inflamation//
this battle is easier that beating Michael J. Fox at operation//

good luck

“flex”ya head ta ass be’in brave tryin ta battle like your somekind’ve hero,
Getting canned like trash,cause I hexed ya text record n its stayin at zero,
supceptable ta“severd limbs”spear his temple so his mentals aren’t trapped,
amputead while I put”CAPS on fists”ta render his punches”hand-e-capped,
aint a “dick” so u aint gonna ’beat’ me with that hand lotion, you kno im real,
yo kid ya not slick typing with ‘vaseline’ n tryin ta elevate with those ‘high heels’,
My keystyles putting ya in denial~rapverse knows smoking this herb a’int a sin,
Here’s a catchphrase“your played”like reruns of”jepordy”we already kno who wins,
This kids froze n pissin, hestates ta leave like a “shook tree” in a “paused movie”
Rewind “press decline” my lines are more effective than the ”shrink” in a jakuzzi,

if ya don't get some lines ..don't vote cause they all make sense.....

damn i thought it was gonna be tougher than that..i woudnt've came so hard if i knew...

uppin 4 votes peeps..................................

uppin............................................. .....

damn your fuckin sleeping alot.........................

Voted For: DV8

Not breaking down lines this time, no need

Flex-a mixed up structure...it flowed nice, but i didnt like the way it was setup...no hard punches or personals...more self glorifyin than punches...weak battle...elevate

DV8-Nice opener and kept the structure and punches constant, one of your better battles i've seen...some ok wordplay in there...i like the high heels/elevate wordplay...overall good drop

Voted For: **FLEx**

yo lol da last line lmfao, good drop to both of u,

uh its basically broke down yo punches,

structre-Dv8
flo-Flex
wordplay-Dv8
Vocab-Flex
punches-Flex

close battle dawg

v/Flex

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uppin for explained votes...........................

Voted For: DV8

okay nice i gota go with dv8 yo he came real creative on dis wun...and flex da 3 line thing fukks up ya flow dogg

opener-dv8
structure-flex
punchlines-dv8
creativity-dv8
multis-dv8 he had a few
personals-dv8 da shit about flex record
enjoyed-dv8.....he took dis wun with his punches and creativty..flex u ahd a good structure but none of ya lines stood out nothin hit hard..pause

RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS R IN MY SIG BOTH OF YA'LL

uppin............................................. ....

Voted For: DV8

sTUCTURE: FLEX
Multies: DV8
Puches: DV8
Personals - neither
Vocab - DV8
overall - DV8

Ok DV8 i vote for you.. first of all, flex' first three lines fucked him up because it was self-glorification.. next his punchlines after that were limited and only ones didn't hit.. your though did connect in some spots and your multies were cool too.. it helped your flow and your set ups and punches outshined his..
stcture could of been better, but in this case you didn't need it.. V/DV8

return favor in my thread please, will you? thanx, here's the link..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138484