e-dubz vs. state capitol
 

8-10 lines due 15 mins after check
u spit first, i set it up
no hate, crew or d/r votes, no feedin
good luck...

no make it blind spit.....................................

iight blind spit..but its due 15 after check.. checkin in

i’ll stay sprayin for days..............this kids playin-with-gays
his spits couldnt be path-Illogical if he lost his way-in-a-maze
this battles a fairytale n imma be the gingerbread man cuz u cant-catch-me
even if we was playin cards n both drew a pair yo still cant-match-E
it dont matter this bitch tryin to be Mrs Mathers, so gather all yo ammo
erupt fire on yo ass like a volcano, yo lines couldnt play me if i was a piano
neva attractin a woman cuz you couldnt make the bed rock if you was Fred
its like im drummin my verse into your brain im guna get it through you head
your aim is clearly off target your showin emcees that you miss-this way
my punches goin thru you, makin your ass more “holy” than Christ-mas day

Beaten Me Is like retards In College..It Aint Gon' Happen......
Guns is Clappen...kids spittin serious, but the crowds just Laughin....
you couldn't stack doe even if you worked at the bakery....
You couldn't see gold even if you played for the Lakers, G.....
Stay Alert, Dubz Just Got Merked..And His Feelings Are hurt.....
one line will leave you burnt, Your Shits out of style like Fat Albert.....
you,and your career have the same things in common, they both fake....
Lines'll Kill You, leave your body at the bottom of the lake....
Burn you to crisp, you lied when you said you was sick
...so i guess the sayin "Lier Lier Pants On Fire" works For You.....
Cause really i dont know who's wacker..you or your crew

ITS OVER KID

spit that in 5 mins...i was eatin LOL my fault..n i freestyled it...

this battle was aight....but my vote gotsta go to e-dubz. his punches were clearer and his style was more constant and it just flowed a lot better. state capitol...i was feelin ya in our battle homie but i think your rhymes were too simple in this one...no beef y'all.

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i guess...but my verse was sick its wordplay patna..LOL

uppin

iight i like e dubz style, even though i really didn't understand it but i'm feelin it, nice punches and a nice flow. State, your shit was tight to, and i like how u keep it simple, but i think it was juss a little too simple. Ok battle threw and threw, ya'll both could elevate a lil, my vote goes to:
e-dubz

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i forgot
 

o yeah vote on thezz plz

thanx
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130988
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130971 :thumbup:

edubz gets this battle cuz his verse was way harder than states... State- opener was boo boo and closer was boo boo... word play was koo tho...

dubz- sick word play in the opener... ok closer ... enough to beat this guy...1

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E-Dubz - Good verse. Good lyrics, structure and punches. Opening wasn't bad. Last two lines weren't very good for a closer but it was a hot bar.

State Capitol - Last line was nice. Good verse just as e-dubz. Lyrics, structure and punches.

But i'm goin wit dubz on this cuz he was just a little ahead of you lyrically.
Vote - E-Dubz

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uppin fo da ko....

theres some D/R goin on in here...dont get me wrong u did have a good verse...but not a good enuff verse to KO me..theres somethin up...jus play fair and dont fuckin cheat