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M&rk 08-20-09 04:28 PM

3 new tracks, tell me what you think
 
comin out wit new tracks here lately, stick wit me

http://www.jamglue.com/mixes/113858...ag-Mark-Schafer
http://www.jamglue.com/tracks/11422...ix-mark-schafer
http://www.jamglue.com/mixes/113861...-time-ft-Ut-man

wiley d 08-20-09 05:10 PM

i fux wit it it was alright..i was the last verse in hold u down and the second in boss ..tel me what u think


http://www.myspace.com/bmoreslilnellz1

M&rk 08-27-09 12:40 PM

good choice on the beat. actually aint sing bad in hold you down. exept the song is about bein a player, not lovin a bitch haha. hear you last verse, flow was good at the biggining, maybe fall off a little bit, and could of gone more lines while it fades out, u end a little abrubt.
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boss. first dude has two dope lines, dont free style cuz i write good, and another, you came hot second too, but sometimes when you switch your flow u get off beat a little and then get back on though, shits still worth listenin to, pretty good shit. i'm mark schafer, imma add u up on myspace

_Talksic_ 11-20-09 05:22 PM

-kind of like a big deal- not feeling your appoach to the beat not feeling the lyrics,no hate
-heartbreak collision-approaching the beat a littel better not feeling lyrics its alright
-stop that time- not feeling lyrics,not really feeling delivery no hate......
im asuming you recorded these along time ago though your newer shit is alot better..no hate

M&rk 11-23-09 05:02 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by JP Morgan
good choice on the beat. actually aint sing bad in hold you down. exept the song is about bein a player, not lovin a bitch haha. hear you last verse, flow was good at the biggining, maybe fall off a little bit, and could of gone more lines while it fades out, u end a little abrubt.
..
boss. first dude has two dope lines, dont free style cuz i write good, and another, you came hot second too, but sometimes when you switch your flow u get off beat a little and then get back on though, shits still worth listenin to, pretty good shit. i'm mark schafer, imma add u up on myspace

i take it, this site is getting hacked into again? bet it has something to do with my name JP Morgan and me calling him the devil. NO JOKE :cussing: i didnt type on my own track :huh: :laugh: :thefinger :help:

_Talksic_ 11-24-09 01:34 AM

yeah that happened to my myspace when i started talking about similar shit, i had to delete my profile and start a new one then a couple days later my internet and phone line were cut,acutally cut cuz of some constrution or something and during the time i didnt have the internet my profile was writing people,and it actaully fucked up shit between a girl that def had potential for me to marry....creepy shit.

M&rk 11-26-09 04:03 PM

yeah, i need to get an ak


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