2 time vs. coo coo capone
 

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dog im from the east coast ill have you feelin this in CA
me bein top grade here, thats the only time you SEE - A's
see b this aint a battle cuz see he
under wear im at cuz this fruits looms aint high enough to reach me
TV the only time you can see me
cuz while you beep beep in a fake jeep im deep seat wit a take three
take three bars and we'll see if capone can win
but its just gonna be lost history, cuz capone is dead
wit no bones to tend to, you disappear faster than casper
wit a ass backwards view of the chick who passed as an actor
actress, but i attack misses
so you in trouble cuz this youths bubble just broke and im pissed
buy a new shovel and RIP, like the letters you cut short
and wit this verse, youll know what god gave you a butt for


haha!!!

I gotta give this one to 2time...........I just didn't like the way coocoo's verse was structured. It was hard to see what he was tryin to say. Maybe if he tried to reword some of it, it might have been better...........

2time, your shit wasn't all that good either but I felt that you came wit better punches, that is why you won this one. Keep on practicin...........I wanna see what you do in your next battle

Vote-2time

breakdown for coo coo capone:

flow:slick easily the best part of your verse the mutli use was solid 9/10

volcab:alright nothing great but yeah it was working 7/10

punches: "who used you as jail bait- and used tools/ that vibrate/ to play with/ yo prostate" this was your only punch and it seemed to hurt you more almost then 2 time saying you were locked up with these guys 3/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for 2 time:

flow:a couple of multis in the start settled into an average flow good job 7/10

volcab: solid through the whole verse good job 7/10

punches:best line,"wit no bones to tend to, you disappear faster than casper" there was a couple of other not bad lines too you difenatly got this in contrast to your oppenent good job 7/10


overall:21/30

vote--pretty close battle when you read through the verse but my vote is for 2 time

This battle was close. But 2 time came a little harder with punches and stuff. Not too strong from either.

V/ 2 Time

2 tyme not a good battle, but u had flow and punches, but i think the vocab wasn't that good.14/20

Coo Coo again not a good battle, u were all over the place. i think u can do better and next week i want to see an improvement.

good verses uppin over no shows

umm...good battle...but it goes to 2time coz he kept it simple....coo coo you tryed to hard to fill your verse wid with vocab.....and you kind lacked any real flow dawg.....2time....some nice punches and overall you did beta...pz
:D
V/2time

Aight Check Dis...

2-Time: 5/10
Your Verse Was Aight, No Real Punches or Personals, Multis and Metaphors You Lacked, and You Lacked Vocab. But KEep Elevating, Good Drop Pimpin.

Coo Coo Capone: 3/10
Hmm..You Have Da Right Mind Set, Just Put Your Vocab, Into A Better Flow, and Add Sum Mulits and Metaphors In Dat Ish...Your Ish Will Be Hot, Just Keep Elevating Kid.

Vote-2 Time

~R~

This niggas named 2 time/ Probably work with the 1 time-
blowin his wistle like Officer Pickelstine---wtf no that doesnt work
coo coo your structre needs some serious work and you lack creativity
2/10

cuz while you beep beep in a fake jeep im deep seat wit a take three
take three bars and we'll see if capone can win--umm ok ??
2time not sure what that was about eitheryou cats are up in the lyrical championship league your not gonna go far with this shit but 2time you had a decent structre and your flow went alot better than coo elevate fellas
coo coo 2/10
2time 3/10

"dont get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
Krackmittens
Undestrucatble ----you will see

Neither flow was that great, but 2 time actually had a straight flow and his style would be great if he had better vocab and metas. but it was still good enough to win.

Vote=2 time

my vote is for 2time he just had punches that were better then capone.......
and capone i thought you were trying to hard with the multeis...
but both were not that great.....
you guys had dayz to wright these you should of done better.....

vote=coo coo capone