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Group E: Wyte vs Ill.Eyes
 Welcome to the 1-2 Punchline League! This is week one so this is the only week you'll go into without any wins or losses. This is the beginning of something great. You've only got seven battles this season. And all seven are against different opponents. As you may know already, your in groups, and we made them even in competition.. so prove that YOUR the best. Cause right now its all just hype. Here's how things are gonna run.. Battler #1: Ill.Eyes Battler #2: Wyte Battles go up Sunday night Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET) Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET) Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET) 5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET) Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do: - Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding. - If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed - Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. Even if it's a no show win, if you dont leave links.. you lose. - If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates. |
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Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears.
& Your in love with life.. ..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years |
If i am correct, i think im suposed to drop 2 punches?
Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life Yeah my life cheated on me... ………...With your fuckin wife Okay you had a nice punch, u suck and you aint tough And saying……........^…..^… …Just means yours wasn’t harsh enough |
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You've never won awards.. nonoone'll even mention this queer... so writing in white must be the fuckin HIGHLIGHT of your career. |
Illeyes
Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears. & Your in love with life.. ..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years Coulda been decent, wording wasn'r harsh enough for me though Wyte Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life Yeah my life cheated on me... ………...With your fuckin wife Yeah you coulda of flipped it better, comes off as your dissing yourself Okay you had a nice punch, u suck and you aint tough And saying……........^…..^… …Just means yours wasn’t harsh enough played concept Illeyes You've never won awards.. nonoone'll even mention this queer... so writing in white must be the fuckin HIGHLIGHT of your career So-so punch Even, though I liked Illeyes final bar which won it for me.Wyte sort of just lost due to not flipping the 1st bar harsh enough & dropping a played one next. V/Ill |
^^ - To anyone seeing this, this was a good vote because it was well explained. Everyone should vote like this. Anyway
Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears. & Your in love with life.. ..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years The use of the concept was not that original, but it was okay, it did hit him Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life Yeah my life cheated on me... ………...With your fuckin wife okay, the idea was good for a follow-up, but doesn't make sense the way ya worded it cuz his wife would be cheating on him, not you, if you guys were doin' shit Okay you had a nice punch, u suck and you aint tough And saying……........^…..^… …Just means yours wasn’t harsh enough I like ^^^ punches, but I felt this was just a bit bland and not really that witty You've never won awards.. nonoone'll even mention this queer... so writing in white must be the fuckin HIGHLIGHT of your career. doesn't really work because you don't highlight with white, you highlight with yellow, orange, blue... Overall, battle was okay but a bit rushed as you guys didn't really think about the meanings on a few of your punches as you both had a punch which might have seemed good and the concept was good, but the execution of it didn't make much sense. However, when comparing the other bars, I think Ill's first bar was better than Wyte's 2nd bar and that slightly gave him the edge. Vote - Ill Eyes |
thanks for the votes..
and Datruz- that highlight line was thought up because my rv skin you couldn't read the white words so i had to highlight, i dunno if you guys have that same skin or not.. well. 2-0, uppin' |
Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears.
& Your in love with life.. ..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years seen concept b4.. not bad tho Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life Yeah my life cheated on me... ………...With your fuckin wife meh... not really a good feed Okay you had a nice punch, u suck and you aint tough And saying……........^…..^… …Just means yours wasn’t harsh enough blah You've never won awards.. nonoone'll even mention this queer... so writing in white must be the fuckin HIGHLIGHT of your career. punch was str8 overall i think Ill.Eyes just came more original and harder.. wyte... i just hate 3 liners n all those.............................. but still get wit the program V.Ill |
v/ILL
wyhte came played and boring. worded bad. Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears. & Your in love with life.. ..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years ^ eh, decent but a played concept. nothing amazing. best punch in the match tho. an eh battle. |
Vote: Ill.Eyes
Wyhte..... punches were a little on the weak side and seemed a little rushed. Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life Yeah my life cheated on me... ………...With your fuckin wife ^^^ was your best punch.... but concept was a little wack.... you probably could of word'ed it a little better and made it a nice punch Ill.Eyes..... 1st punch was funny and hard! second one was decent... could of been better both of your punches were harder hitting than Wyhte... concepts were better.... wording of punches were better ::No hate just opinion:: |
Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears.
& Your in love with life.. ..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years i really liked this concept, worded off.. but nice Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life Yeah my life cheated on me... ………...With your fuckin wife too live battle, doesn't hit hard in text Okay you had a nice punch, u suck and you aint tough And saying……........^…..^… …Just means yours wasn’t harsh enough nothign special.. nothing bad You've never won awards.. nonoone'll even mention this queer... so writing in white must be the fuckin HIGHLIGHT of your career. yeah.. you dont highlight with white... abit gay really v/illeyes |
Death comes easy, son don't turn around from your fears.
& Your in love with life.. ..But dude, I can even tell it's been cheating on you for years yeh nice Punch was wack, basically you said im in love with life Yeah my life cheated on me... ………...With your fuckin wife This punch could of won you this battle if it was worded better Okay you had a nice punch, u suck and you aint tough And saying……........^…..^… …Just means yours wasn’t harsh enough sure its played to fuck You've never won awards.. nonoone'll even mention this queer... so writing in white must be the fuckin HIGHLIGHT of your career. Not all that personally i think ill's second punch was below par but he didnt need anything special to win here V-ill |
Yo. I'm gonna be out from tonight til sunday.. I'll try to get as many links up, but none of the battles are done yet so....
1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232635 |
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