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schema 01-18-05 10:23 PM

14. Socrates vs. 21. Pop Lotty
 
Check-In By Midnight EST Thursday
Verse By Midnight EST Sunday
The Battle Will Stay Open Until Someone Reaches 7 Votes Or A KO
Ko's Will Be 5-0 or 4-1

22 Lines

No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney.

Anyone (Including The Battlers) That Freeposts Or Sways In This Thread Will Be Banned From The Next Tourney No Questions Asked. If Your Name Isn't On The List DO NOT POST.

This is for 500 Dollars Boys...Good Luck!

Designated Voters:
New Method
Mimesis
9th Degree
Un'Touched
Smokajoka666
Ladi Fiya
4fil
Schema
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt
Celestial
Led Poetic
Hotshh

Pop Lotty 01-18-05 10:37 PM

Fuck you nigger!!!!!

Logic The Goonie 01-18-05 10:37 PM

clash of the tiatns my nig

check

Logic The Goonie 01-20-05 07:06 PM

My net is fuckin up so I gotta drop now.

Look, Pop is whack, my worst punches is stoppin him
This bitch is so Scrappy that Scooby Doo adopted him
Ya my homie and all, but ya whack, yea you heard me
Winnins ya Maine goal but you’re stuck in New Jersey
Ya records whack, plus ya garbage, listen dog ya hated
Pop couldnt create a buzz...unless the drink is carbonated
You ugly fuck, a fuckin joke, bout to get mangled duke
Fuck living, even ya sweater is trying to strangle you
Son is fat as fuck, excersizing is what he needs to learn
I dont care...but hes too fat to get as far as hes concerned
Look son, I dont even need techs, my rhymes flaming
i’ll hand you an L and I dont even KNOW sign language
I looked at my verse and shrugged, almost got rid of it
n’ let you be the KORV since your fat ass is like 90% of it
Let me get out slow and have you get it...U-R-WHACK!
Nigga i’ll hit you wit enough Clipse to be sued by Startrack
You wanna hang son? Well lemme give you the noose
Plus I got niggas that’ll Hop On Pop faster than Dr. Suess
Plus ya girls a ho, son I aint fuckin her regardless
Cuz shes had more tricks b/w her legs than slam dunk contests
Here comes another fat joke, but I swear look at the guy
First nigga I gave an L and it wasn’t a big enough size

G'luck my nigga.

Pop Lotty 01-20-05 07:22 PM

It's sad that...
...Soc is 16…but dude ain’t got no life fasho…
Cuz in his pic, he was a lil too close to that 10 yr. old
Talking bout how you a pimp, you know you’re lying cuz….
Told em you being gay is a joke, some ppl still don’t believe it was
Broke nigga, need the money, you fresh? That’s a fable
This battle could down to the wire…not, Soc can’t afford cable
On my dick for the longest, already aware that he cant contest
Just Sunday he was making threads about how him and I are the best
Mad on AIM when Dimez was givin me attention, biggest clown in here
Soc, theres more fish in the sea…I hope you go drown in there
You have no life, don’t want me to put you on blast dude
Exposin ya aliases will be more of a embarrassment than losin the battle
Can’t see me bitch, you’ll get left with 2 swelled up lips
But your known for breaking niggas…since you’re on a ‘Feeble’ dick
You better be on ya A game, and bring your best at me
Cuz we even in notes and letters….that S always comes after P
I’m already well prepared for Soc, ready to leave em roasted
Cuz he’ll prolly want me to review his verse on AIM before he posts it
And good look at the voters list, I guess schema noticed too…
…cuz we all know who ‘will a pear’…and vote for you
You took a beating, now pack ya bags and ya pride witcha
I haven’t seen anything this ugly…till I zoomed in on ya picture


Yeh...

Logic The Goonie 01-20-05 07:31 PM

I just realized that voters need to look at both of our pics to get some of it
-_-

But getcha vote on niggas

Don't count this as a freepost please :(

N.Tavarez 01-20-05 07:38 PM

nice battle^^should be close..no hate..both of u good luck

FlowIntelligent. 01-21-05 03:15 AM

Breaking this down bar by bar will take a while but oh well its the finals

Socrates:

Look, Pop is whack, my worst punches is stoppin him
This bitch is so Scrappy that Scooby Doo adopted him
^^lmao pretty funny solid punch good set up 9/10
Ya my homie and all, but ya whack, yea you heard me
Winnins ya Maine goal but you’re stuck in New Jersey
^^good meta liked the maine/NJ thing pretty good 7/10
Ya records whack, plus ya garbage, listen dog ya hated
Pop couldnt create a buzz...unless the drink is carbonated
^^decent good meta 6/10
You ugly fuck, a fuckin joke, bout to get mangled duke
Fuck living, even ya sweater is trying to strangle you
^^lmao maybe your dopest bar so far good personal and punch 9/10
Son is fat as fuck, excersizing is what he needs to learn
I dont care...but hes too fat to get as far as hes concerned
^^wack 4/10
Look son, I dont even need techs, my rhymes flaming
i’ll hand you an L and I dont even KNOW sign language
^^good bar 6/10
I looked at my verse and shrugged, almost got rid of it
n’ let you be the KORV since your fat ass is like 90% of it
^^decent 5/10
Let me get out slow and have you get it...U-R-WHACK!
Nigga i’ll hit you wit enough Clipse to be sued by Startrack
^^dope meta wack punch 6/10
You wanna hang son? Well lemme give you the noose
Plus I got niggas that’ll Hop On Pop faster than Dr. Suess
^^lol good shit 7/10
Plus ya girls a ho, son I aint fuckin her regardless
Cuz shes had more tricks b/w her legs than slam dunk contests
^^dope bar good meta 8/10
Here comes another fat joke, but I swear look at the guy
First nigga I gave an L and it wasn’t a big enough size
^^another good punch good closer coulda been better 7/10

overall : 74/110 (67%)

Pop Lotty:

...Soc is 16…but dude ain’t got no life fasho…
Cuz in his pic, he was a lil too close to that 10 yr. old
^^lmao dope opener good personal 9/10
Talking bout how you a pimp, you know you’re lying cuz….
Told em you being gay is a joke, some ppl still don’t believe it was
^^ another good personal 8/10
Broke nigga, need the money, you fresh? That’s a fable
This battle could down to the wire…not, Soc can’t afford cable
^^decent 5/10
On my dick for the longest, already aware that he cant contest
Just Sunday he was making threads about how him and I are the best
^^ehh decent 5/10
Mad on AIM when Dimez was givin me attention, biggest clown in here
Soc, theres more fish in the sea…I hope you go drown in there
^^good punch 6/10
You have no life, don’t want me to put you on blast dude
Exposin ya aliases will be more of a embarrassment than losin the battle
^^decent personal ok bar 7/10
Can’t see me bitch, you’ll get left with 2 swelled up lips
But your known for breaking niggas…since you’re on a ‘Feeble’ dick
^^decent personal decent meta 6/10
You better be on ya A game, and bring your best at me
Cuz we even in notes and letters….that S always comes after P
^^concept is played 4/10
I’m already well prepared for Soc, ready to leave em roasted
Cuz he’ll prolly want me to review his verse on AIM before he posts it
^^good bar 8/10
And good look at the voters list, I guess schema noticed too…
…cuz we all know who ‘will a pear’…and vote for you
^^good bar 7/10
You took a beating, now pack ya bags and ya pride witcha
I haven’t seen anything this ugly…till I zoomed in on ya picture
^^ehh decent closer could have been better also 6/10

overall : 71/110 (65%)

dope battle.. but soc edged this one out with better concepts... just my opinion though, let the best man win.... my money :thumbup:

New Meth0d 01-21-05 10:27 AM

soc
Look, Pop is whack, my worst punches is stoppin him
This bitch is so Scrappy that Scooby Doo adopted him
lol nice
Ya my homie and all, but ya whack, yea you heard me
Winnins ya Maine goal but you’re stuck in New Jersey
nice, good wordplay
Ya records whack, plus ya garbage, listen dog ya hated
Pop couldnt create a buzz...unless the drink is carbonated
good
You ugly fuck, a fuckin joke, bout to get mangled duke
Fuck living, even ya sweater is trying to strangle you
decent
Son is fat as fuck, excersizing is what he needs to learn
I dont care...but hes too fat to get as far as hes concerned
ehh
Look son, I dont even need techs, my rhymes flaming
i’ll hand you an L and I dont even KNOW sign language
....ight
I looked at my verse and shrugged, almost got rid of it
n’ let you be the KORV since your fat ass is like 90% of it
lol
Let me get out slow and have you get it...U-R-WHACK!
Nigga i’ll hit you wit enough Clipse to be sued by Startrack
decent
You wanna hang son? Well lemme give you the noose
Plus I got niggas that’ll Hop On Pop faster than Dr. Suess
lol nice nice
Plus ya girls a ho, son I aint fuckin her regardless
Cuz shes had more tricks b/w her legs than slam dunk contests
decent
Here comes another fat joke, but I swear look at the guy
First nigga I gave an L and it wasn’t a big enough size
lol nice


pop
It's sad that...
...Soc is 16…but dude ain’t got no life fasho…
Cuz in his pic, he was a lil too close to that 10 yr. old
ehh
Talking bout how you a pimp, you know you’re lying cuz….
Told em you being gay is a joke, some ppl still don’t believe it was
good
Broke nigga, need the money, you fresh? That’s a fable
This battle could down to the wire…not, Soc can’t afford cable
lol
On my dick for the longest, already aware that he cant contest
Just Sunday he was making threads about how him and I are the best
decent
Mad on AIM when Dimez was givin me attention, biggest clown in here
Soc, theres more fish in the sea…I hope you go drown in there
lol nice
You have no life, don’t want me to put you on blast dude
Exposin ya aliases will be more of a embarrassment than losin the battle
decent
Can’t see me bitch, you’ll get left with 2 swelled up lips
But your known for breaking niggas…since you’re on a ‘Feeble’ dick
good
You better be on ya A game, and bring your best at me
Cuz we even in notes and letters….that S always comes after P
decent needs to be worded better
I’m already well prepared for Soc, ready to leave em roasted
Cuz he’ll prolly want me to review his verse on AIM before he posts it
good
And good look at the voters list, I guess schema noticed too…
…cuz we all know who ‘will a pear’…and vote for you
lol nice
You took a beating, now pack ya bags and ya pride witcha
I haven’t seen anything this ugly…till I zoomed in on ya picture
decent

aight this was a close battle........but i think soc got this because he was more creative adn witty. since soc came with more creativity i thought some of his punches hit harder. pop you had some real good lines fish/sea and willa peer but then soc had some even better lines like maine/jersey scooby doo and a good personal the L size line and the dr.seuss line........so ima give this to socrates for harder hittin punches and better creativity

v/soc

Celestial 01-21-05 11:09 PM

Look, Pop is whack, my worst punches is stoppin him
This bitch is so Scrappy that Scooby Doo adopted him
Ya my homie and all, but ya whack, yea you heard me
Winnins ya Maine goal but you’re stuck in New Jersey
You ugly fuck, a fuckin joke, bout to get mangled duke
Fuck living, even ya sweater is trying to strangle you
I looked at my verse and shrugged, almost got rid of it
n’ let you be the KORV since your fat ass is like 90% of it
Here comes another fat joke, but I swear look at the guy
First nigga I gave an L and it wasn’t a big enough size

vs

It's sad that...
...Soc is 16…but dude ain’t got no life fasho…
Cuz in his pic, he was a lil too close to that 10 yr. old
Talking bout how you a pimp, you know you’re lying cuz….
Told em you being gay is a joke, some ppl still don’t believe it was
Can’t see me bitch, you’ll get left with 2 swelled up lips
But your known for breaking niggas…since you’re on a ‘Feeble’ dick
And good look at the voters list, I guess schema noticed too…
…cuz we all know who ‘will a pear’…and vote for you
You took a beating, now pack ya bags and ya pride witcha
I haven’t seen anything this ugly…till I zoomed in on ya picture


This was a decent battle.. not what i expected from the championships but it was cool. Pretty personal verses from both, but Soc edged it. Pops verse couldve been worded much better.. and i was generous giving you 8 quotable lines when they werent worded that greatly. Anyhow.. socrates wins this 5 bars to 4.

V/ Soc

schema 01-22-05 01:02 PM

Socrates
Look, Pop is whack, my worst punches is stoppin him
This bitch is so Scrappy that Scooby Doo adopted him
->>lmao...9/10
Ya my homie and all, but ya whack, yea you heard me
Winnins ya Maine goal but you’re stuck in New Jersey
->>pretty good...7/10
Ya records whack, plus ya garbage, listen dog ya hated
Pop couldnt create a buzz...unless the drink is carbonated
->>meh...5/10
You ugly fuck, a fuckin joke, bout to get mangled duke
Fuck living, even ya sweater is trying to strangle you
->>needed mor syllables in the second line...plus ive heard similar...5/10
Son is fat as fuck, excersizing is what he needs to learn
I dont care...but hes too fat to get as far as hes concerned
->>it cant just be wordplay...its gotta make sense too...5/10
Look son, I dont even need techs, my rhymes flaming
i’ll hand you an L and I dont even KNOW sign language
->>there you go...7/10
I looked at my verse and shrugged, almost got rid of it
n’ let you be the KORV since your fat ass is like 90% of it
->>setup line was mehness...second line was decent...6/10
Let me get out slow and have you get it...U-R-WHACK!
Nigga i’ll hit you wit enough Clipse to be sued by Startrack
->>not bad...6/10
You wanna hang son? Well lemme give you the noose
Plus I got niggas that’ll Hop On Pop faster than Dr. Suess
->>cool cool...7/10
Plus ya girls a ho, son I aint fuckin her regardless
Cuz shes had more tricks b/w her legs than slam dunk contests
->>lol...7/10
Here comes another fat joke, but I swear look at the guy
First nigga I gave an L and it wasn’t a big enough size
->>nice nice...a few too many fat jokes but this was one of the better ones...7/10
->>overall...71/110 (65%)

Pop Lotty
It's sad that...
...Soc is 16…but dude ain’t got no life fasho…
Cuz in his pic, he was a lil too close to that 10 yr. old
->>blah...4/10
Talking bout how you a pimp, you know you’re lying cuz….
Told em you being gay is a joke, some ppl still don’t believe it was
->>you just said it...you didnt flip it at all...5/10
Broke nigga, need the money, you fresh? That’s a fable
This battle could down to the wire…not, Soc can’t afford cable
->>there you go...7/10
On my dick for the longest, already aware that he cant contest
Just Sunday he was making threads about how him and I are the best
->>blah...5/10
Mad on AIM when Dimez was givin me attention, biggest clown in here
Soc, theres more fish in the sea…I hope you go drown in there
->>stretched...meh...5/10
You have no life, don’t want me to put you on blast dude
Exposin ya aliases will be more of a embarrassment than losin the battle
->>decent...6/10
Can’t see me bitch, you’ll get left with 2 swelled up lips
But your known for breaking niggas…since you’re on a ‘Feeble’ dick
->>ok...6/10
You better be on ya A game, and bring your best at me
Cuz we even in notes and letters….that S always comes after P
->>oh so played...5/10
I’m already well prepared for Soc, ready to leave em roasted
Cuz he’ll prolly want me to review his verse on AIM before he posts it
->>lol...7/10
And good look at the voters list, I guess schema noticed too…
…cuz we all know who ‘will a pear’…and vote for you
->>your best line by far...8/10
You took a beating, now pack ya bags and ya pride witcha
I haven’t seen anything this ugly…till I zoomed in on ya picture
->>weak closer...5/10
overall...63/110 (57%)


Pop I see your creativity is there but this verse felt rushed and socs felt like he took a long time on it...you shouldve tried to make every bar a killer...if you had dropped 11 "will a pear" quality bars you wouldve won here but you didnt and unfortunately for you he won here.

Congrats to Socrates...500 bucks dude...time to jump around your room gettin hype...you earned it.

v/Socrates

schema 01-22-05 01:10 PM

Winner by KO (4-0)...and the new KORV champion....

Socrates

Congratulations to Socrates and thank you to all the participants in the tourney. Me and Flow are gonna be running another one so keep your eyes peeled. I hope you guys have had as much fun being in it as I've had running it. Weve had our share of controversy just like any tourney always will but Im very happy with the outcome overall. Congrats to Lotty and the rest of the top 4 for making it this far. Let's see if he can defend his title in the next one. :)


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