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(1-0) Mista_Auth3ntiq Vs Hotshh! (1-0)

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battles open monday
check ins due wed
verses due fri
Voting due sun

Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaa

Check

Ohh shit..yeah bwoy...lets go!
Check.............

Take ya Cash Crop..... like Raiding Crack Spots Making Jack Pots
Invade ya Wack Block an sneak in ya crib to Break Ya LabTop (oh no!)
I Demand da Mic, but we can Stand and Fight with the Hands or Knife
but do you Plan to Type Tonight?.. I'll Crush you like a Can of Sprite
Damned if Im Wasted by da Man that Im Facing Damage Replace Em
dats da Ramifications... Mista you spit fire? well Damn it! Im Satan
Bitch you Lame.. for Envisioned Fame, Authentiq Contradict His Name
So Switch ya Game Whats your Height? Stand Up....Ill Fix Your Frame

it was a no-show... :huh: ...k but im gonna crit it antway cuz its nice... :thumbup:

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Originally Posted by hotshh!

Take ya Cash Crop..... like Raiding Crack Spots Making Jack Pots
Invade ya Wack Block an sneak in ya crib to Break Ya LabTop (oh no!)
^^lol, nice, good flow I Demand da Mic, but we can Stand and Fight with the Hands or Knife
but do you Plan to Type Tonight?.. I'll Crush you like a Can of Sprite
^^pretty goodDamned if Im Wasted by da Man that Im Facing Damage Replace Em
dats da Ramifications... Mista you spit fire? well Damn it! Im Satan
^^decent set up...2nd line multis was creative...well doneBitch you Lame.. for Envisioned Fame, Authentiq Contradict His Name
So Switch ya Game Whats your Height? Stand Up....Ill Fix Your Frame
^^this was aight,.....

overall ya had good content n ya ryhme scheme was consistant..
only thing i would suggest would be a lil stronger vocab, but as i see
you already wasted a decent verse.....dont stress..lol...pz..RTF...

thank you..............

fucking no show?...........i was sure mista would drop...oh well, moving on

Hotshh wins By No Show

Hotshh! new record 2-0
Mista_auth3ntiq's new record 1-1