Judicial System Topical battle piece
this is what i put for my battle piece but that kat no showed and the piece got big props seein what yall think here it is....its kinda long but read it tell me what ya think feedback yall
Intro Eyelids open showing fuzzy blue, pigs shakle the dizzy dude I feel nauseated this isnt koo, worried not know what to do I roll over into my own puke, roll back like i was hittin da juke Officer laughs askin what i took, reportin a rape that i was in book Tried to remember but couldnt think Miranda and wasnt Wayne-right New law but couldnt form insanity because my girlfriend died. Gravity hit eyes heavy so i cried, mind blocked out the drunken fight Starting from begining for Alliby, sat with fingers on eyes, oh- why We consumed alcohol like infected wounds, just got over fight n ruin She kissed me on the neck said come to my room, intercoarse hit rubbin poon Was done she cum then heard get off me n boom, boyfriend of coarse in room Shot girlfriend and called cops to shoot himself at noon, no witness no goon Judicial system Cops caught me a block away, sirens sound mixed with bloods terror fray Pleaded innocent cops nothing to say, shouldnt a ran looks like old O.J. Judge restated my rights i might have lost, and left a bail that no one post Cold steel made cage made Bubba boss, wanted anal sex punched him n lost Cried self to sleep bitin pillow and butt floss, told injustice to officer said toss Lawyer lied way outta crime, sayin efficent evidence never met time Jury was delivered by bias bind, Hopin god please have mercy this time The girl was a daughter of high money kind, father tried to buy the jury, fined Nerves were out like play review on rewind, water fell from gravity made shine Turned rose hoped for grace from powers that bind, jury said no guilty, sighed however, rape was still case n i got five, jury said she fifteen that bitch lied Went to corrections found way to survive, hid in corners and open night eyes never shower almost got guted few times, inmates hear rape n droppin guys Beatin unconscious doctor saved my life, few seconds later never make five Fourth year gone more like war day by day, stabed kid for attackin with plate rather be higher level can sleep without devil, count days with head on swivel got 24 hrs left no advil, head hurts, hope these toons dont drop the anvil sittin by self at table, having pankakes, surup poisoned dont look like maple Outro Talked to governor asked for pardon, laughed like i farted beg u pardon Left like animal hopin huntin stop, wardon...racing heart barily winnin Gordon Got an hour left knew they waitin at door when, Sleepy passed a note to him I have to last an hour on weightliften hours, run n hope the guard hits tower So im rappin one last time, spittin one last time, hope judge reads next time armageddon B.Wills gots to shine, go out fightin impossible battle Acilles dyin Styx is reachin, left with money on eyes for reapin, want to die sleepin Step outside Bubba charges with knife and cop snipes his life Blood hits face justice came that night, walked out smiling free tomorrow free tonight... All belongings gone new life, wake up lemmings real life, death canceled flight tonight... |
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