Killa vs LIL JOE
 

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Let's get this started.. holla.. 1

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iight yo.. I dont feel like waitin around.. So.. Check it..


Yo..
I'll throw Consistant-Punches Verbaly ill wit Instant-Crunches..
This niggas 'Missin all atempts' like swingin 'Distant-Punches'..
Venomous-Spits lines so ill there Spontanious-Hits'..
I'll do Hazordous-Rips wit lines of Cautios-licks..
Nautious-Hits show this nigga Outstandin-Performances..
Niggas on lock but he's still Demandin-Entrances..
I'm 'rippin dis thread' like a 'Knife-Trough-A-Cloth'..
Im 'Burnin this nigga' like 'Light-To-A-Moth'..
I aint even 'Hire you yet' and you 'Callin-Me-Boss'..
playin 'basketball wit nut' this niggas 'Ballin-My-Sauce'..


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my flow is superior, imperial/
your shit'scorny like the kellogs cereal/
fuck you rhymes cause your lyrics are inferior, period/
in this game i saty on to lose i can'taford/
youll eventually fall of like an umbilical cord/
im broke buti get by on this though/
but yous a fagot you get bi like sisqo/
your only hard on the internet if i was in a chat youd boot meh/
your like a burnt cd your just plain ol bootleg/
i left you like a two dollar slut your bowleg/

hmmmmmm WOW.........
THE BREAKDOWN
Opener - killa....the distant punches line was fuckin insane
Flow - killa....perfect flow n i was feelin it
Punches - killa....his punches were direct n hit harder than joe's
Structure - killa....all lines lcicked n ur structure was lined up n easy to read
Multi's - killa....is there really an explanation needed?
Sustainment - killa.....you kept it up all battle
Closer - killa....basketball line was fuckin crazy
Enjoyment - killa....had the better verse n had me laughin
LIL JOE - u need to werk on not stretchin yo lines, havin direct punches, n flow....keep the reader into it....elevate ull get betta........
VOTE - killa
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1-0 my lead.. let's get some more votes.. i got you bro.. holla.. 1

C'mon now.. Were's da damn votes niggas.. holla.. 1

1-0 my lead.. Let's get some vote people.. Holla.. 1

one sided killa got this on everylevel joe you need to seroiuosly elevate an look at your opponents verse and catch on what you suppost to be doing in here elevate kid and killa nice drop but could always elevate

Flow=killa
Punches=killa
structure=lil joe
personals=killa

kinda a one sided match isnt it.. killa had this

Nice killa u had good metas and structure and just overall lil u was ok but u can do better,

Killa=6.5/10
Lil=4/10

Killa try out for Da Army

KILLA RAP WAS JUST WAY BETTER THAN WHO EVER THE FUCK HE WAS GOING AGAINSTI MEAN LOOK AT THIS FLOW THIS IS WUT I CALL *K1LlA*
Yo..
I'll throw Consistant-Punches Verbaly ill wit Instant-Crunches..
This niggas 'Missin all atempts' like swingin 'Distant-Punches'..
Venomous-Spits lines so ill there Spontanious-Hits'..
I'll do Hazordous-Rips wit lines of Cautios-licks..
Nautious-Hits show this nigga Outstandin-Performances..
Niggas on lock but he's still Demandin-Entrances..
I'm 'rippin dis thread' like a 'Knife-Trough-A-Cloth'..
Im 'Burnin this nigga' like 'Light-To-A-Moth'..
I aint even 'Hire you yet' and you 'Callin-Me-Boss'..
playin 'basketball wit nut' this niggas 'Ballin-My-Sauce'
JUST MURDERED HIM VOTE =KILLA