MC Firetruck vs Conceptions
 

Daubs
Ysdat
Mimesis
DRKMAN
Implicit
Drama Queen


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-30-05 at 04:36 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

LMAO @ wantin 2 come back on more wack aliases. And dat 4 person voting council, wtf yo? Battlez have between 5 and 9 votez, so y da fuck there only 4 ppl on da list?

Bcuz The list Isnt finished you Ass didnt You get my PM .//....?

You Dumbfuck

Let the voting ride

Conceptions has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-28-05 08:10 AM.

Yo wat's da point of a pinkslip battle if u just gonna come back yo?? Should be ip-style yo.

look Man STFU And Accept The damn battle you little bitch
................You loucky I even Wasted my time on Yo Weak ass

Now Accept so I can drop

There now its six Strobe has agree'd to edit the list anytime someone new gets on so dont worry asshole

Why havent you even checked in .........

LMAO u made it 3 dayz 2 check so stfu clown. U need to be ip banned but I guess I can merk yo ass then merk your next alias pinkslip style yo.

MC Firetruck has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-05 09:44 AM.

Ok pussy.

U never had a bitch, even just a kiss is what you sure hope
Da only Miss Conception here is when I heard u were dope
Fuck yo, I hate da bullshit, an u'r full of it, friend
U lead that Trigga crew? Well 2 bad u ain't pullin' the win
Fag, it's obvious u love da cock, that's for sure man
Playin' with enough Hardballs to make Keanu Reeves your fan
Get whored, damn, my punches have u bruised and slumped, g
I'll leave u so blackened, George Bush would kick u out tha country
It's funny, how much you d/r kids so u won't be lonely, bitch
U bit a whole verse from Ysdat...
...then put him on the voting list
Bro quit, u'll never sell, u'r more like "I need fans!"
Only record u got, is most times coming back from ip bans
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You're finished, off this site, fuckin' wannabe vet
But I'm curious...
...which of ur wack ass aliases are we gonna see next?

Bye bye bitch.

Voted For: MC Firetruck

damn, fire truch got his fucking hose on with this shit :bored:

Seen as Im on the voting list do I need to break it down?

fire got punches from every angle, personal as fuck whilst conception only had a record play that wasnt really solid.

Firetrucks punches are alot more original, were as conceptions are played for example ..

"Like a Broken Escolator Everyone Knows You Cant Elevate"

It's funny, how much you d/r kids so u won't be lonely, bitch
U bit a whole verse from Ysdat...
...then put him on the voting list

woot, im a star!!

anyway.

vote Mc firetruck

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This was feedback posted for Conceptions
 

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Voted For: MC Firetruck

MC Firetruck

U never had a bitch, even just a kiss is what you sure hope
Da only Miss Conception here is when I heard u were dope
^first line is a bit simple set-up but the second line finished it off quite nice.
Rather predictable nameplay though but still decent 6/10

Fuck yo, I hate da bullshit, an u'r full of it, friend
U lead that Trigga crew? Well 2 bad u ain't pullin' the win
^First line is bleh, can't give you nothing for that.
Second line is good personal, making use of wordplay to form punch 7/10

Fag, it's obvious u love da cock, that's for sure man
Playin' with enough Hardballs to make Keanu Reeves your fan
^good punch formed with wordplay, first line is again decent build-up.
Nothing too special too, no real personal touch to it 6/10

Get whored, damn, my punches have u bruised and slumped, g
I'll leave u so blackened, George Bush would kick u out tha country
^self-glorifying but funny wordplay in last line 5/10

It's funny, how much you d/r kids so u won't be lonely, bitch
U bit a whole verse from Ysdat...
...then put him on the voting list
^hmmmm, decent but I feel you could've worded it differently so it would hit harder 6/10

Bro quit, u'll never sell, u'r more like "I need fans!"
Only record u got, is most times coming back from ip bans
^hahaha...now this one made me chuckle...nice set-up.
Hardhitting punch with personal feel to it 8/10

You're finished, off this site, fuckin' wannabe vet
But I'm curious...
...which of ur wack ass aliases are we gonna see next?
^aight, good to finish him off in fact. Cool punch 7/10

Total: 45/70 = 64%


Conceptions

You'll Be Trying To Stay On Top Like You Was A Skippin Rock
Sittin On The Stove Was The Only Time Your Shit Was Hot
^hmmm only time your shit was hot-lines are sorta played but they still work.
Not feeling first line though 6/10

I Rip The Top Off MC's So I Just Watch Your Head Fluidz Spill
Im Killin Yo Ass So The Voters Know Who Has The Dead Skillz
^not feeling first, pure self-glorification. Second line is
better though 6/10

When Im Done I'll DJ on Yo Eye So You Can Have Mixed Sight
You Spit Straight "BullDog" So Yo Bark Is Worste Than Yo Bite
^nice wordplay in first line, you continue it in second line
and finish it off with nice punch 7/10

You've Been 5-2 For The Longest You Havent Made a Change
We Can See That Yo Rhymes Is Stink Like having Must Stains
^could've worded it differently so it hit harder but still decent 6/10

I Crash You If You Get In My Path Son They Call Me A Bolder
I'll Leave You Shit Out Of Luck Like You Eatin 4 Leaf Clovers
^nice wordplay in second line, first one is bleh though 5/10

See If Punchez Were Bombs Firetruck Would Never Detinate
Like a Broken Escolator Everyone Knows You Cant Elevate
^escalator line is played as hell but the first line is good 6/10

You Know You Dont Have To Show...The Battle Is Optional
You'd Have a Better Chance Of Dissin Me..If You Dropped a Topical
^haha lmao...this one made me chuckle, nice way to close it 7/10

Total: 43/70 = 61%

Close battle right here, both dropped some nice stuff but I expected better in fact.

Flow: Conceptions
Personals: MC Firetruck
Punches: Conceptions
Creativity: MC Firetruck
Vocab: Conceptions
Total score: MC Firetruck
Winner: tie...

Okay so it's a tie...this makes it even harder on me...the total scores are close as well and I must say I enjoyed both. But in the end, my vote goes to MC Firetruck for having more creativity in his verse. I felt like Conceptions had bit too much self-glorification in it and I didn't like reading that. Very close battle, gonna be close call for many voters I think.
No hate to either one of you btw...

Voted For: MC Firetruck

MC Firetruck

U never had a bitch, even just a kiss is what you sure hope
Da only Miss Conception here is when I heard u were dope
Not really..
Fuck yo, I hate da bullshit, an u'r full of it, friend
U lead that Trigga crew? Well 2 bad u ain't pullin' the win
Nope..
Fag, it's obvious u love da cock, that's for sure man
Playin' with enough Hardballs to make Keanu Reeves your fan
Decent..
Get whored, damn, my punches have u bruised and slumped, g
I'll leave u so blackened, George Bush would kick u out tha country
Pretty good..
It's funny, how much you d/r kids so u won't be lonely, bitch
U bit a whole verse from Ysdat...
...then put him on the voting list
Ehh.. Decent..
Bro quit, u'll never sell, u'r more like "I need fans!"
Only record u got, is most times coming back from ip bans
Cool..
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.
.
You're finished, off this site, fuckin' wannabe vet
But I'm curious...
...which of ur wack ass aliases are we gonna see next?
Pretty decent..

Conceptions

You'll Be Trying To Stay On Top Like You Was A Skippin Rock
Sittin On The Stove Was The Only Time Your Shit Was Hot
Played..
I Rip The Top Off MC's So I Just Watch Your Head Fluidz Spill
Im Killin Yo Ass So The Voters Know Who Has The Dead Skillz
Not a punch..
When Im Done I'll DJ on Yo Eye So You Can Have Mixed Sight
You Spit Straight "BullDog" So Yo Bark Is Worste Than Yo Bite
Decent concept.. worded to shit..
You've Been 5-2 For The Longest You Havent Made a Change
We Can See That Yo Rhymes Is Stink Like having Must Stains
Played as hell..
I Crash You If You Get In My Path Son They Call Me A Bolder
I'll Leave You Shit Out Of Luck Like You Eatin 4 Leaf Clovers
Played out..
See If Punchez Were Bombs Firetruck Would Never Detinate
Like a Broken Escolator Everyone Knows You Cant Elevate
Still played the hell out..
You Know You Dont Have To Show...The Battle Is Optional
You'd Have a Better Chance Of Dissin Me..If You Dropped a Topical
Seen this used against topical heads forever..

Overall, this battle was pretty one sided. MC Firetruck had some decent and cool lines, and only a few that didn't connect. Conceptions had one decent concept, but worded it poorly, and the rest of his lines were mostly played to hell. MC Firetruck had the better overall verse and he gets my vote.

Vote - MC Firetruck

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