Skitten (vs) New Rap Order (vote Now)
he 4got to put a poll in da other thread...so VOTE HERE!!!
skitten verse= you think you running like you stealing my purse i keep my rhymes in there so you can cheat your verse but i'll punch you in da face and it hurts when you hold your nose then when i take a stab at your stomach, wait for the herse because you know you worse i hate the way you curse will you be a fucking pussy in the demo you make or will you write down each verse you take just wait until your wake i'll go into your pockets and a smile i'll fake i'll show the public the cheating you did when i show them that crumpled up piece a paper the words you shitted make you looked even faker new rap order verse= i'll have skitten skippen after i erace his chest / and have him limpen after i spray his legs / u still wouldent "see me" if u had eight eyes / put a four-four to ya forehead and make u hate-life / niggaz like u leave my battles lookin like sleepy hollow / told you not to follow...hit u wit the hard combo's / i have the sickest method / put a verse to ya bones and hav em fallin in seconds / leave them in a way sceintist gona be studying for years / you aint at my level bitch...N u still aint no where near / you still a boy...cant play wit the big toys / n-r-o is one dangerous hazard to avoid / VOTE NOW...5 VOTE WIN |
opener:skitten
closer:skitten strucure:tie punches:tie wordplay:NRO overall:skitten NRO u had sum gud concepts, but didnt quite pull off the punches, skitten, same, both y'all need to elevate a lil |
uppin for sum morr votes........................
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