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.Wicked One. vs Intensify effect
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 01-30-05 at 10:43 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 03:02 PM.
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16 lines............................................. ...
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.Wicked One. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 03:05 PM.
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Fast dissensions made after the honest criticism was laid...
Hitting me back is like hitting a bitch with aids... Your crew goes out to fight while you run and hide... Mite as well commit suicide heres a written homicide... I'm ill, there's no doubts, so how can u expect to hurt me?... When it's like aids laid down and had a child with herpes... Let it sink in, I ain't playing with kid, just cry coward... Beat him to death, I'm stern with the words like I was Howard... And I ain't wasting anymore lines, or anymore time... On a kid, thats been playing with it so long, he was born blind... I'm kinda like Vince Carter cause I'm half man half amazin... Please kid u got 32 Losses, got me thinkin that u rap as bad as an raisan... I'm contagious like a case of Sars... I'll start clappin your ass and have you seein stars... Just like Def Jam Vendetta my game is blazin... Yet you still have no idea who you facin... |
i hate unlimited battles so i hope u aint O.D with ya verse dogs 4-real so imma keep mines at a 7 to 8 bars max....
cuz anything ova is to long of a read..... AIGHT LETS DO THIS..... this match'll make wickedone resemble a newpart enflamed.... cuz im'a beat hes ass worse then noticing ya B's are Ds like report card u changed.... *think when moms find out* N i aint need to take notes to prepare for this mess.. cuz im sick wit the flow... its like my lines havin insest... and to confess, i can see u'r stress and ya style im blaming-son... This kid Untouchable? Yea right, and so is Jenna Jameason... ya spit like a pistol jam'in-son, u'll lose even if u mastered this course... cuz u couldnt burn a track... if u set flames to a race-course... so why do this?, like a cripple with a cane u make no sense stupid.... tryin to prefect ya flow in text?, why don't u try reverse'in time?so never heard of music.. *HA* u talk about a W's but flow lacks a WIN-FACT, so i'll rip-facts IN brawl's... so quit rap, cuz my punches push'in u back like straps on bras..... pause..... befor u re-laps in ya tracks... and make ya weak heart collaps.... cuz its like u AIM but shot-shit, and 2 dices aint have no parts in ya CRAP... BITCH!!! *craps dice game * hope u came with heat cuz i aint put my full effort in this battle dog 4-real.... |
Voted For: .Wicked One.
aight this was an aight battle... nothing spectacular but here is my break down: Wicked- ya shit was pretty good, straight opener... structure needs a little work, some of it was stretched... flow wasnt hurt to bad by this, it was aight... punches hit well and personals i thought were pretty dope, especialy your second bar about his crew, i liked that... vocab was actualy pretty good as was creativity and metas... overall not a bad verse... 7/10 IE- ya shit was also aight... just like his your structure needs work... flow was aight but could have been better seeing as how some of ya lines were pretty stretched... punches were good, i really liked the jenna jameson line... personals were hit and miss... vocab was aight as were mettas... overall 6/10 no hate at all to IE you did your thing and i respect that, i was just feeling Wickeds verse a little more... both of you need to up on ya structure and that will even out your flow.. good battle by both of you.... VOTE- WICKEDONE............... |
upp'in for more votes.............................................
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
both ya'll suck
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Lol.......i went weak ........ayo ......i aint gonna get in this......How bout you shut up and battle me then....then WE'LL SEE WHO SUCKS........
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but aint never had the balls to call me out??? :huh: da talk if tuff but its sad its coming from someone whos a weak pussy like u.... see me when u think u finally ready.... and i said fromt he jump i came weak right after i posted my verse i aint say it after a couple of days later or anything i knew from jump i came weak but still probley good enough to win.... upp'in for more HONEST VOTES.... |
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Voted For: intensify effect
this was a decent battle, but my vote goes to effect for harder hitting punches, both verses flowed fine, but both of you should start dissing your opponent instead of glorifying yourself Let it sink in, I ain't playing with kid, just cry coward... Beat him to death, I'm stern with the words like I was Howard... N i aint need to take notes to prepare for this mess.. cuz im sick wit the flow... its like my lines havin insest... Where do you go with both these lines? but I voted for IE, he edged out this battle and came a bit harder than Wicked 1. Please return the favor plz thank you. http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=174170 |
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