xceltiz vs wordplay
 

ten to 14 lines max
first to five votes wins
three votes =knock out
deadline one hour after my verse is posted.....

yo....I masticate every sylable you claim to dictate/
to get you bitchin' to a mod, about how you got raped/

this battle isn't yours, I'll e-mail my face/
with detail and rage, to mean mug and disgrace/

I got a grave dug, and a stone with your name/
engraved, so deep, it's in chinese two years away/

you aint on right now, cause your a minor up in class/
I bet you can't log on,unless you talk to mom and ask/

permission, I split herbs like fission, makin' blood fizz up/
to twist, fuck, and blurr your vision/

I'll cut up the judges, and recieve a split decision/
concieve a bitch religion, and make you the beast up in it/

beliefs are eased to make-believe, shake your family tree/
mutilate the falling leaves, how long can you hang, from a limb thats deceased?/


I'm waitin' good luck

Dq' xceltiz
 

it's been more than an hour.....there was a deadline....you agreed to it....you broke it.....somebody dq him, and give me my win

uppin for a verse....dog where you at?............................................... .......????????

Im here.
Fuck This Gay Quere...Look Im Nothing New to This
Cos il... Make My Big Foot Drop N.. STAND UP!.. like Ludacriss
& Who Is This? a Chump Maybe? Or Whatever THis Fool Says..
His Best Rhymes Is Proberly.. Paradice
.................................................. ...^Damn He's The Wack LL Cool J!
Go To School N Play, Hide N Seek ..Cos Dawg im outta Ya League.
-QUICK.. M-E-R-K-I-N-G...Oh Now Go N Breath!
Hold Your Breath Thou..Cos.. Here It Comes A Super Punchline!
Cos il Get Gats On Your Neck..And then only Tell U... 1 Time

my vote goes to wordplay.....it was a nice easy read....flowed well with some nice multi's, the punche's were there but coulda hit a bit harder....pretty good considering you went first
Xceltiz-His Best Rhymes Is Proberly.. Paradice
.................................................. ...^Damn He's The Wack LL Cool J<-------what's this i got a little confused...i dont know why you did that but i dont see the relivancy.
your super punchline is in need of a rewrite...wasn't feelin it at all....keep workin at it!

^ Shut Up Herb 14 lines vs 8....
& still you vote bullshit
shut up before i end your career.

you had day and a half to answer back,you know how many lines i got..so why didnt you match.........hmm what ev.

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

Shut the Fuck Up U PUSHING ME ON PM BEGGINE ME TO DROP I DONT COME ON RB AND LIVE AND FEED DICK ON IT LIKE U DO..... I JUST CAME ON WHEN I READ UR PM AND DROPED 8 TO BE NICE QIUCK SO U QUICK BITCHING
shut the fuck up before i end your career also.
that guy was a clear herb and dont know wot structure or a punch is so hold your dick down.

YOU WERE RAPPING ABOUT BULLSHIT WHO CARES BOUT CHINEASE IN TWO YEARS THIS WERE U WACK KIDS DONT UNDERSTAND IF U SPIT THAT ON MTV U GONA BE CALLED A WACK RAPPE RWHO DONT KNOW GOOD LYRIKS AND FLOW WHO GIVES A SHIT ABOUT MENTALLY PHISYCALL OR CHEMISTY OR ANY OFF THAT NERD STUFF U SPIT LOL " IL CUT UP THE JUDGES" WHO ARE THESE JUDGES IN THESE BATTLE?

^^^lmao at this kid....anyway, wordplay takes this battle with ease. he had a creative verse with some nice punches, no personals really but his wordplay and punches killed Xc...Xc, your verse didn't even really make sense, it was really weak...look at some other battles for help, you dissed on your opponent and the way he wrote his verse but that's some technical shit...need to write more like that and if not then don't expect to have a winning record..pz

my keystyle has em tastin' tears.......ha

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still uppin for them votes....

back to the peak..vote ya'll ....help me pull the trigger....ha

yo....I masticate every sylable you claim to dictate/
to get you bitchin' to a mod, about how you got raped/
Not a bad opener...5/10
this battle isn't yours, I'll e-mail my face/
with detail and rage, to mean mug and disgrace/
Liked the creativity, nice...7/10
I got a grave dug, and a stone with your name/
engraved, so deep, it's in chinese two years away/
Got a chuckle on this...6/10
you aint on right now, cause your a minor up in class/
I bet you can't log on,unless you talk to mom and ask/
wasnt feelin this one...2/10
permission, I split herbs like fission, makin' blood fizz up/
to twist, fuck, and blurr your vision/
Very nice flow, liked this one...8/10
I'll cut up the judges, and recieve a split decision/
concieve a bitch religion, and make you the beast up in it/
First line was nice, overall good...6/10
beliefs are eased to make-believe, shake your family tree/
mutilate the falling leaves, how long can you hang, from a limb thats deceased?/
Ok closer, not the best, not the worst...5/10

::Score- 39/70::


Fuck This Gay Quere...Look Im Nothing New to This
Cos il... Make My Big Foot Drop N.. STAND UP!.. like Ludacriss
Weak opener in my opinion...4/10
& Who Is This? a Chump Maybe? Or Whatever THis Fool Says..
His Best Rhymes Is Proberly.. Paradice
.................................................. ...^Damn He's The Wack LL Cool J!
umm...??...2/10
Go To School N Play, Hide N Seek ..Cos Dawg im outta Ya League.
-QUICK.. M-E-R-K-I-N-G...Oh Now Go N Breath!
you really need to elevate man...3/10
Hold Your Breath Thou..Cos.. Here It Comes A Super Punchline!
Cos il Get Gats On Your Neck..And then only Tell U... 1 Time
Prolly the best of your lines, and it still was...wack?...5/10

::Score- 14/40::

Vote~ wordplay

p.s. - sorry i cant poll vote, but there's my shitt ^^

ya deff wordplay on this one his rhymes were sick

"you aint on right now, cause your a minor up in class/
I bet you can't log on,unless you talk to mom and ask/"
funniest shit ive heard in a while

last up for votes I can do....ya'll stop lettin' me down.....