<(Torture Chamber)>New Shit From Ya Boi!
 

good shitl...i used this beat to..hook is catchy....i still think u should up ur vocals a touch...flow is nice n shit...like the emotion too bro

keep it up man

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Your quality has gotten better from the last time I heard you. You actually enunciate a little better to. You could still use a little work there. Your Accent doesn't hold you back as much as some of the UK rappers I hear on here. You could use a little help on your hook......not the words, but the production of it. You seemed to add an echo to it and lowered the volume.....but you should have raised the volume and added some dubs or something......go to The Alcatrakz Process in Audio Assistance and see where he talks about chorus'......it'll help. The rest is pretty nice though.....keep it up :thumbup:™

Thanks Man

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