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Mr W.Rite 02-04-04 12:23 PM

Mr W.rite v. FuE-xIoN
 
regular rules
10-16 max
i dont care if your crew votes
i trust they would vote honestly
no dicking
no swaying
blah blah

i wont start til u check in
drop whever preferably today though...
out

FuE-xIoN 02-04-04 11:34 PM

Check.............................................

MyNd. FuLL 02-05-04 06:59 PM

check
dropping later on...
aight............................................

Mr W.Rite 02-06-04 07:35 PM

his weak text is no comp for me...this kid’ll never be truly respected
when his spot on the roster just makes Wits End look desperate...
back to the drawing board...sadly mistaken if u think u can handle me..
how can u call yourself a man...when Hottie wears the pants in ya family...
you’re pinch of loser..sprinkle of hopeless..wit just a tad of disgrace...
cuz its MyNd over matter...but for this Fue-xion took matters place...
shoulda ignored’em...reading your shit couldnt have been more borin....
either he lies like a rug...or maybe thats just the best place for him...
he’s bitch made...and probably doesnt have the balls to confront me...
good for making an ass of himself...when playin pin the tail on the donkey...

FuE-xIoN 02-08-04 02:18 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mr W.Rite
either he lies like a rug...or maybe thats just the best place for him...

^Sounds Familiar....But I Wont Say Anything Else....Good Verse ;)

Nobody At RB Travels South Faster Than You, Your Asshole
Is Dirty.....And I Pity You Live In The Same City!
Shoulda Never Accepted To Battle Me....Now I Type N Laugh
.....While I Read Your Siggy!!
And For You To Not Even Rep A Crew....I Show You Some Sympathy!
By Beatin Your Brains Out, And Changin Your Custom Title To
.....MyNds Empty!!
Your A Fuck Face, And Still No Way To Get A-Head Of Me!
If Skill Level Was Measured Highest On The Ground...
...You'd Be A Mountain Peak!!
My Punches Repeat On Your Face More Than
....The Seasons Of Big Brother!
Your The Headboard? Im Russian Your Verses....
...Cuz SHEET I Got This Battle Covered!!
I Just Laugh At This Played-Hoe, And Call Him Silly Putty!
I'll End This Battle With The AV Pic In Your Check In....
.....Fuck You Buddy!!

MyNd. FuLL 02-08-04 09:42 PM

uppin..
lets get a few votes.................................

GameTime 02-08-04 10:09 PM

his weak text is no comp for me...this kid’ll never be truly respected
when his spot on the roster just makes Wits End look desperate...
meh..coulda been worded better...4/10

back to the drawing board...sadly mistaken if u think u can handle me..
how can u call yourself a man...when Hottie wears the pants in ya family...
ok...6/10

you’re pinch of loser..sprinkle of hopeless..wit just a tad of disgrace...
cuz its MyNd over matter...but for this Fue-xion took matters place...
pretty alright...6/10

shoulda ignored’em...reading your shit couldnt have been more borin....
either he lies like a rug...or maybe thats just the best place for him...
nope...didnt like..3/10

he’s bitch made...and probably doesnt have the balls to confront me...
good for making an ass of himself...when playin pin the tail on the donkey...
uhh..no..2/10

21/50 for Mynd. Full




Nobody At RB Travels South Faster Than You, Your Asshole
Is Dirty.....And I Pity You Live In The Same City!
Shoulda Never Accepted To Battle Me....Now I Type N Laugh
.....While I Read Your Siggy!!
stretched anyone??....plus not good....2/10

And For You To Not Even Rep A Crew....I Show You Some Sympathy!
By Beatin Your Brains Out, And Changin Your Custom Title To
.....MyNds Empty!!
meh...not too good..4/10

Your A Fuck Face, And Still No Way To Get A-Head Of Me!
If Skill Level Was Measured Highest On The Ground...
...You'd Be A Mountain Peak!!
played concept...3/10

My Punches Repeat On Your Face More Than
....The Seasons Of Big Brother!
Your The Headboard? Im Russian Your Verses....
...Cuz SHEET I Got This Battle Covered!!
nice attempt...but no...3/10

I Just Laugh At This Played-Hoe, And Call Him Silly Putty!
I'll End This Battle With The AV Pic In Your Check In....
.....Fuck You Buddy!!
horrible wording...3/10


15/50....for fue-xion


winner is mynd..full...cuz his verse was better overall...better
more creative punches i htink..
fue-xion coulda been more creative......

Mr W.Rite 02-10-04 08:11 PM

uppin
need more votes..............................

e.coli 02-10-04 08:47 PM

v/mr W rite

w rite-u had a nice verse with some good punches....i feel u came consistant throughout your verse....u also had some creative concepts....i feel u won this battle with harder punches and more consistancy....good verse....7/10

fue-xion-i have seen u come harder....i feel u didnt connect very well with your punches...your verse seemed rushed a lil bit....u had a couple nice concepts that could have been worded better....i wasnt really feelin the beggining of your verse but i feel u picked it up toward the end...i liked your closer....overall decent verse.....6/10

v/mr W rite...nice battle

please hit this honestly
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112534

Mr W.Rite 02-12-04 08:31 AM

guess i'll up this shit\/\/\/\/\/
...................
third up bitches........

Mr W.Rite 02-14-04 12:20 PM

ah fuck it
uppin for the hell of it...
maybe 4th times charm

Freeman 02-14-04 12:58 PM

iight...

Rite

his weak text is no comp for me...this kid’ll never be truly respected
when his spot on the roster just makes Wits End look desperate...
Lol... Nice punch and personal... 7/10
back to the drawing board...sadly mistaken if u think u can handle me..
how can u call yourself a man...when Hottie wears the pants in ya family...
Nice personal... 7/10
you’re pinch of loser..sprinkle of hopeless..wit just a tad of disgrace...
cuz its MyNd over matter...but for this Fue-xion took matters place...
Nice wordplay... Nice concept aswell... 6/10
shoulda ignored’em...reading your shit couldnt have been more borin....
either he lies like a rug...or maybe thats just the best place for him...
Lol... Nice concept and punch again... 6/10
he’s bitch made...and probably doesnt have the balls to confront me...
good for making an ass of himself...when playin pin the tail on the donkey...
Nice again... Good punch... Good closer... 7/10

Overall... 33/50

Fue-xion


Nobody At RB Travels South Faster Than You, Your Asshole
Is Dirty.....And I Pity You Live In The Same City!
Shoulda Never Accepted To Battle Me....Now I Type N Laugh
.....While I Read Your Siggy!!
Not bad... 6/10
And For You To Not Even Rep A Crew....I Show You Some Sympathy!
By Beatin Your Brains Out, And Changin Your Custom Title To
.....MyNds Empty!!
Good personal here... Nice... 7/10
Your A Fuck Face, And Still No Way To Get A-Head Of Me!
If Skill Level Was Measured Highest On The Ground...
...You'd Be A Mountain Peak!!
Hmm... Wasnt feeling this... 4/10
My Punches Repeat On Your Face More Than
....The Seasons Of Big Brother!
Your The Headboard? Im Russian Your Verses....
...Cuz SHEET I Got This Battle Covered!!
Lol... Nice... 6/10
I Just Laugh At This Played-Hoe, And Call Him Silly Putty!
I'll End This Battle With The AV Pic In Your Check In....
.....Fuck You Buddy!!
Not bad... Weak for a closer... 5/10

Overall... 28/50

v/ Rite


Hit this up please...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...482#post1183482

Thanks...

Pz...

touch to gold 02-15-04 04:45 PM

I think Fue-xion just pulled away and wupped ass . Both good verses though.
fue-xion 8/10

Token 02-16-04 11:13 AM

Wow.. Mr. W.Rite pulled an upset.

Fue came way weaker than he can. He underestimated and played around with a different structure. Don't use structure like that tho.. the flow was fucked up cuz of it. Mr. W.Rite's lines all had good potential and quite a few had some nice concepts if they would have been worded a bit better they could have been dope. But you both stayed attacking your opponent just Mr. W.Rite's flow and wordplay/wit overshadowed the categories.

V/ Mr. W.Rite.

SyaNidal 02-16-04 01:05 PM

write-better punches and flow/structure you had
the personals and the wordplay along with some
good meta4s good job on your part....

fue-you didnt have very good punches... you had some
but not as har dhitting your personals were decent...
but your structure and flow wus really fucked up...

My V/Mr W.rite....hit up my battles in sig Vs. Assassin and Vs. Diverse....
and peep my topical with rule in elevated... pzout!...

_-SyaNidal-_


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