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rapverses illest f/sick.
Mystic Chaos
Sick. im bringing it to you complex breakin necks takin checks wagin bets killin cajin chefs just to be the one with the best rep i get the best check better yet im surprised there aint any charges pressed yet yo the names sick dont let it fool ya cuz ill fuckin tool ya give you a book and ill school ya i were the crown cuz i rule ya with a iron fist im the king bitch kiss my ring lemme do my thing fo sho, dis the song i sing who you think you is to depict shit u actin like a fortune tella bitch you aint predict this get tha facts off ya dome leave it alone get tha cold steal to ya brains boom! no bodies home condone ya life yet condone ya futua turn ya back to quick look i aint afraid ta shoot ya im nice with the words but speak louda wit the 4/5th with a full clip ill snag ya bitch and make my own chips dont be playa hatin cuz the facts that im statin are debatin should i end your life or let ya head be achin bloods and crips run and hide when i come by in my low ride strapped with a gloc 9 on both sides just in case the they got four-fives i light em like a roman candle if they cant handle... the style i spit and the flow i bring to the game recognize my name S-I-C-K, its so sick im ill ready to kill just for the thrills be a man step up come on wat ya got? tryna be a thug eva since pac got shot well im in ya face now so u a thug or not talkin all this shit now lets see u back it up cuz im done talkin lets fight or pack it up all your boys aint laughin now so ima laugh it up |
links to come lol
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yo, we tha dopest.
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This Shit Was Pretty Hot, Both Yall Verses Was Straight... Can't Really Give No Critism It Was Decent. Keep Droppin...
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This Was All Right At Most But Where's The Vocab You Are Fragment Rapping A Few Multi's But Why Are You Rhyming The Same Words Get Some Vocab, Bu Tkeep Coming With It You Can Improve And Also A Lot Of This Is Played The Fuck Out
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shut the fuck up.
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Mystic Chaos need feed critique my verse homey please
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no doubt, and if u didnt catch on...me and sick. were obviously fucking around.
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This was aight, flow was good and multies were there, just up the imagery and vocab and it's all good..Stay up
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okay
i see that you guys have a solid grasp of imagery, your verses are constructed visually appealing, and you know how to excite the readers. i think that your only problem here could have been that not much was said. you call this a flex, but where are the relevent punches? where are the "big up to me, i 'm nice" lines? find those and repost. i liked it, but so much more could be said. |
*** Real good piece...I enjoyed reading it...keep it up 9/10 ***
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ummm simply silly
do not take this as a real drop we made a mockery of all the herbs who would come in here just to get posts and say it was dope...wen we made it suck on purpose...... |
that should NEVER be your priority here.
do your best or don't at all. |
the verse was ok but it didnt make much sense and it sounded like a white rapper cause all you did was put rhymes together
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