lifes game(to be continued)!!!
 

i woke up wanting money from young,so i did my work before the rise of the sun,thats how my life begun.
yeah was little crazy,we would all agree life's a little mazey,but shit i dont care its what made me.
i was young at the time,but it was'nt as if there was a sign,so as life went on my brain prefered crime.
no real family,made an arratic me,so y do they hate me?
they gave me no direction,while i was around them i felt the tension,seemed a happier life back when i was in detention.
i was the only kid with no time to be in,other parents found that strange so they took me home and all they found was an empty bottle of gin,then then asked if i was hungry,but soon realized there was no such thing as food in the house there wasnt even a bin.
met alot of strangers(mums men),brang too much danger,but the day after next they became the pray of my anger.
i soon became a member of the drug game,as i think about it now it was a shame,soon got a name,but i didnt care it gave me enough money to move out, yeah mayne!
so a new town for me,felt so fuckin free,a normal life i will now lead.
or so i thought,had a women i practictly bought,another lesson taught my bank balance soon sunk to nought.
to be continued..............................

fix ur damn structure... then ill take my time to read it and drop proper feed... i aint reading this garbage till it looks readable... dude... be real...

It was decent i like your flow, a few stretched lines with gin and bin, the drug game line needs to be changed into sometihing more complext game name shame is to basic nowdays, definitly koo though fits perfect with my new song im writting if you wana know more e mail me @ x37@tmail.com and ill send you my number or if you email alot well talk trough that but i need audio links

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