13. 9th Degree Vs. 16. Jack The Ripper
 

Championship Match

13. 9th Degree Vs. 16. Jack The Ripper

10 Line Minimum - 20 Line Maximum

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Good Luck to both of you..

13. 9th Degree Vs. 16. Jack The Ripper
 

Don't hoe-show homie :)

Checkers
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King Me

Checkmate.

And So... The quest to be king ends here

(Don't Let Anything Fly Over You)
*A rook is a chess piece, that castle one, and 'ship = chamionship
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Paul says:
If I can't make it in time for the chamionship, can you get it postponed?
A mind so astute says:
All good with me
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Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons
Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you
Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!"
Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip
Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship
Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit
But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit
Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter
I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order
You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope!
When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope
Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire
I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire
Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook
Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook'
Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench
Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth
9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing
So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king
(it's not self glory, think 'bout it)

Thank You... Just waiting for 9th to finish his verse and drop it now...

Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts
And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws
What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree
Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy
I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked
But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection
So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question
Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later"
I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader
Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter
I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook
This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock
I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box
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fucka typo, my closer = "grand-gesture"

anyways, dope drop yo, this'll be close

i wann be the first person to vote... lol

jack the ripper:

Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons
^^ lol decent opener, funny punch 8/10
Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you
Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!"
^^ good concept and good punch 7/10
Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip
Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship
^^ haha this was dope man 8.5/10
Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit
But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit
^^ this was ok i wasnt really feelin it as much as the others 6.5/10
Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter
I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order
^^ nice lol migit, decent nameple and good punch 8/10
You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope!
When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope
^^ another dope concept and good punch 7.5/10
Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire
I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire
^^ this made ma laugh lol 8.5/10
Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook
Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook'
^^ nice punch, good play on chess, 7.5/10
Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench
Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth
^^ lol this made ma laugh this was dope name and crew play 9/10
9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing
So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king
^^ nice took me a while but it was creative... 8.5/10

overll: 79/100

i liked your verse alot i thought you had some dope wordplay and some real nice punches and concepts, structure was perfect and flow was on point, i thought there was about 2 bars which wern't as good as the otheres but they were still good... overall you had a dope verse and its going to be hard to beat, good job fam


9th degree:



Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
^^ good opener good wordplay and good punch, 7.5/10
He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts
And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws
^^ haha very creative man nice. 8/10
What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree
Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy
^^ nice again u have good wordplay man 7.5/10
I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked
But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket
^^ nice nameplay and more wordplay wit a good punch, 8.5/10
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
^^ haha this had me laughing 8.5/10
You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection
So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question
^^^ not really feeling this as much as the others 6/10
Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later"
I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader
^^ nice nameplay agen, nice punch 8/10
Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter
I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper
^^ used his whole name lol 7.5/10
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook
^^ nice flow was a lil bit choppy though 7/10
This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock
I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box
^^To me this was your best bar 9/10

overall: 77.5/100

ight man u had a real nice verse.. some dope namplay and some good concepts, structure was different but it worked well... flow was good but it was off in 1 part... other than that u had some real nice shit in there good job fam..



This was real close but imma give it to jack the ripper i felt his punches were more entertaining and had better concepts and wordplay behind them, dont get me wrong 9th had a solid verse but it wasn't enough to stop the ripper lol...

v/ Jack The Ripper

Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons
Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit
But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit
You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope!
When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope
Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench
Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth

A lot of your verse was dope, but WTF @ explaining etc? That was homo, the chess piece line would've been better with no "/" so it seemed forced as fuck, along with that torcher line. And stop with all this structure, i could tell you added extra words here and there to make it look better, fuck structure, its a battle.

vs.

Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree
Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later"
I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so Inturn I'll comebustchins with a right hook

eek fool. I'm mad at you for the axe line. And I used a pasture line before but i'll let it slide since you used it 40636036 times better than I did. The comebustchins could have been worded better but it was good. Compiss line was dope.

Y'all made it close, should be close, but I got 9th takin it.

v - 9th Degree

^^^^^ i think Soc deserves to have his say.... wasnt he (or still is) a mod of the tourney??? not to mention former KORV.... this battle is pretty hard to vote on..... but im still laughin at "compiss on your strategy".... even my boys were rollin off that

9th Degree - 2
Jack The Ripper - 1

Voting council please vote..

Wanted this postponed?, the kid's shook, doubt ya show soon
Cuz when I say that you Jet-Son... I aint calling you cartoons
nice opener 8/10
Listen for the truth, faggot, and just watch how I expose you
Cuz if ya GW, it's no wonder your verses always get a "boooh!"
ok nice 6/10
Kids was 'all-aboard' when ya made the 'ship', i'll smack your lip
Rocking the boat, I hit "9-D" and... sunk his whole 'battle-'ship
lol nice wordplay and good punchline 10/10
Feel that bitch? you know you could never come with some wit
But peeps say your verses are 'stable'... hay... n' utter bullshit
ok nice 6/10
Little faggot, I don't even think a migit could come up shorter
I'm droppin this 9... like the gunshop just canceled the order
lol nice 8/10
You’re my apprentice kid, will he win KORV 2? Ha!!! Hell nope!
When this bitch 'un-leashes' her rhymes, we never collar dope
lol nice wordplay there wit the collar 10/10
Hurting you lyrically, this is a blow-out, fuck down to the wire
I got Degree kept in torchair(torcher) like I lit his seat on fire
ok nice 6/10
Play boardgames with his brain, leave him 'scrabled' and shook
Then cut his body into chess/chest pieces to show he's a 'rook'
ok another wordplay but not that effective 8/10
Firing shots off at your crew yo, got bitches hiding in the trench
Fuck ghost writers, man, i'll kill 9... and Degree will be the tenth
ok good punchline 8/10
9 is obedient to his master, and he's learned well under my wing
So this clown'll make a grandg-gesture(jester) when I'm the king
ok yea no self-glory but not a good closer 6/10

Overall-76/100
Nice man alot of wordplay personals and alot of effective lines ur verse was very structurized and had 2 perfect 10 counts that is a good job man the vocabulary was ok the flow was ok as well as i said structure was good and punches as u may already kno it was hott man keep doin what ya doin man 4real



Honestly, you're nothing special, and I ain't one to bluff
I'd chew you up and spit you out, but you ain't even up to snuff
ok opener 6/10
He wont reign, I'm stormin' upon his horizon of thoughts
And take this cats 9 lives without needing some time to paws
ok nice wordplay wit cats and paws 8/10
What's the cause? Well you got cocky and thought you had Degree
Plan was all mapped out, so I'll compiss on your strategy
ok nice 6/10
I'm savage, g, I almost gay bashed and had your faggot ass kicked
But you never came out the closet...you just stayed in there to jacket
ok nice line 6/10
How'd you ever get to the championship? I mean the fact is
I grazed through like half your battles and couldn't get pasture wackness
ok hott punch there 10/10
You can't hack it, skill level is way below perfection
So I'm bout to axe you, and I'm not a black kid with a question
ok nice 6/10
Suggested a battle before but you said "No P, later"
I expected the duck, even your alias is the e-vader
lol nice word play and punch 10/10
Plus your main account suggests biting, so now I'm actin' bitter
I'm so flat out tired of you I'm about to Jack The Ripper
lol nice punch man good one 10/10
Had enough, friend? That's how it might look
But you revved my engine, so InturnI'll comebustchins with a right hook
kinda stretched but still packed a little more 8/10
This battle's a waste of my time, so instead of crackin' your clock
I killed you online, now have the admins put Jack in a box
lol man thats a good one man best line in both verses 10/10


Overall-84/100 damn u had a little weak lines but u had like 4 perfect punches thats good man and that closer was the best ive seen from both verses so good job on that and structure and flow was a lil off and vocabulary was ok so good job man keep doin ur thing as well

Scores:
Personals-JR
Punches-JR
Effectiveness Punches-9D
Most Effective Line-9D
Flow-none
Structure-JR
Vocab-vone
Points on verse-9D

this was a tie battle and cuz it was a tie im gon have to go wit the points on the verse and 9D had the most so my vote is gonna go to 9D cuz he had the most effective verse but both competitors did their thing good job to both competitors
v/9th degree

3-1 9th degree, upping this....