"my color" feedback....
real story about someone i know...gettin this shit off my chest, all keyed
You can love me or hate me cuz at the end it won't matter/ If you would ever take a bullet for me shit i'm most flattered/ Most defintely i've been rejected for most of my life/ Injected from the rest, enduring this strife/ Is it my color or my religion?, sometimes it's hard bein a christian/ Atheists think they got it easy they don't know what they're missen/ Nigga got a problem u fuckin tell me like a man/ You givin me attitude n lip cuz I gave u my helpin hand?/ Trained you from the ground up, even though I never give a fuck/ But cuz my color ain't yours u gotta bitch n strut/ I hear shit behind my back, mumbles from this coward/ A man that don't speak up is a man without mind power/ Seperation cuz we come from different lives/ He workin for a goal I can see the determination in his eyes/ Momma musta raised a fool, brought up to hate colors as long as it don't belong to you/ Contradicting bob marley instead of one love there's two/ Blamin me for bein ignorant, pointin fingers at the innocent/ Guilty as charged for bein uneducated, its just my color u hatin/ Interracial relationships is a sin in ur eyes, just ur color ur datin/ It's like cold war, everyone's fightin but the progress is unknown/ This fuckin racism won't stop until Jesus comes and takes us home |
it's alright some of the bars are alittle uneven kinda not making the flow what it could be, the rhymings kinda basic too but overall it's a pretty good peice i'd give it 6.5/10
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no doubt man good lookin
ya it needs some work, keyed that shit |
Naw Naw, That Waz Nice, I've Seen People Post Shit Thats ALOT Worse, Keep Doin Ya Thang Mayn n As Long As You Keepin It Real Then Cant Nobody Touch You, Good Lookin, Holla !!1!!
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yea i agree with Shottaboi up there i' have seen alot worse! Keep it up good drop
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