"Blasphemy" by me,thoughtz.. sick ass beat
 

yes yall.. i did come from hip hop dialect.. its a little boring there.. i like this site a lil better even though i just joined but its obvious ima get more feedback n shit here... and i have a feelign niggas aint gunan be grimey really so im saying watup all hope ya welcome me n shit.. for now peep my beatz this seems to be a good site to advertise them all. you know..

"Blasphemy" Sick ass beat please peep

hit me up on Aim on crackedthoughtz or on diasjoel1256 on aol to have a custom made beat for you.. dont worry im pretty cheap just hit me up ill discuss prices with you n shit

good looking and i hope ya welcome me all

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its good, might try aligning the beat a lil better, also mix it up a lil more. and use better quality sounds

i think the meldoy is too quick for the drumline and way too loud..nice drumline tho..work on it abit more

dont like the way its chopped...it could be put together better than that...getting repetitive...needs a break @ the 4 bar, or the 8th...or both...hype sounding...just needs more. this chorus...if thats it...repetitive as well...really hype sounding...it just needs some more work.

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