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Paramik 'vs' Verbal Phenom
Rules Good Luck Both |
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so wen yall gon spit?
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when i'm done fucka ya mum...
dont post here.. and post in your own.... |
Nearly Forgot About This.......
Ayo, Paramik Was Weary Of This Battle,Who Could Blaim Him Flow In Instant Messengers Only Time Ya Punches R AIM'n Like Intoxicated Rivers ... Ya Vile Flows Are Shunned Mixin Drinks n Toxins Is The Only Way U Have a Deadly Punch Computers Best Friend, Just Another Internet Groupie Ya Avatar Is Self Explanitary net Geek, Buddys Are 2D Ill Para-Lize Ya MiK..Was Already Impossible To Win This Tourny Is Urs, But Im Afraid No Rap In The Para-Lympic I'd Give You A Win Outta Sympathy, It Won't Be Belived Unthinkable, How Can I Be Beat By A Spider Man-Geek |
Damn!!! i almost forgot about this writersblock too... so busy....
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Verbal Phenom cant lyrically spit venom cause it aint a verb…
Cause the way ya venom flows…. easily gets cured by a herb. So you can call me apothecary, the way im removing ya venom. Might as well call him anthrax….. ………………………………the way the poison letters stopped sendin’. Fact is this kid’s not even important, VP’s the VP without the I. Joined the newbie bashing crew, proves this kid’s not a wise guy. This kid is lines are a joke, I didn't really need to post a verse. The crowd woudn't feel your flow if they were dieing of thirst. Another fag battling me, he always so proud about getting beat. I mean who places shit in their sig, like a link to their Defeat? click the link |
I want the votes to be broken down to each bar and given a very well long explination jus to prevent Drs and hate voting.....
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Good battle fellas
Breakdown for verbal: Paramik Was Weary Of This Battle,Who Could Blaim Him Flow In Instant Messengers Only Time Ya Punches R AIM'n Setup was just there didn't have nothing to do wit punch, punch was based on a kinda played concept but was creative, but worded poorly. Like Intoxicated Rivers ... Ya Vile Flows Are Shunned Mixin Drinks n Toxins Is The Only Way U Have a Deadly Punch Setup has a nice meta "intoxicated river"<--I liked that, punch was pretty goos too, only prob was the bars didn't rhyme...but definitely very creative. Computers Best Friend, Just Another Internet Groupie Ya Avatar Is Self Explanitary net Geek, Buddys Are 2D Haha!!!!That was funny, again very creative meta, decent personal but its the meta that stood out...setup worked perfectly for this one. Ill Para-Lize Ya MiK..Was Already Impossible To Win This Tourny Is Urs, But Im Afraid No Rap In The Para-Lympic Setup was blah seemed u was trying to rhyme with para-lympic too bad...but the meta in the punch again is what stood out to me..creativity is nice. I'd Give You A Win Outta Sympathy, It Won't Be Belived Unthinkable, How Can I Be Beat By A Spider Man-Geek Setup was blah on this too, punch was also kinda blah...spider geek is a corny diss, an a weak way to close but it was fair nothing great. Breakdown for Paramik: Verbal Phenom cant lyrically spit venom cause it aint a verb… Cause the way ya venom flows…. easily gets cured by a herb. Eh for a opener...setup was weak coulda used a different meta other than its not a verb, punch was eh...not really hard hitting but a creative meta. So you can call me apothecary, the way im removing ya venom. Might as well call him anthrax….. ………………………………the way the poison letters stopped sendin’. I personally hate went catz structure a line like this^^^setup was nice I liked that...but punch was played an anthrax line?<---very played Fact is this kid’s not even important, VP’s the VP without the I. Joined the newbie bashing crew, proves this kid’s not a wise guy. Again great setup had me anticipating a harsh punch but ya punch killed it...it was jus weak. This kid is lines are a joke, I didn't really need to post a verse. The crowd woudn't feel your flow if they were dieing of thirst. Setup was blah seems u was looking for a rhyme wit thirst, an punch was blah..I see what u was trying for but it was worded horrible. Another fag battling me, he always so proud about getting beat. I mean who places shit in their sig, like a link to their Defeat? The link didn't show anything when I clicked it so this made no sense to me...so I have to say it was weak cuz I can't see anything in link. Verbal: Flow: 9/10 Structure: 8/10 Punches: 7/10 Metas: 9/10 Creativity: 8/10 Overall:41/50 Para: Flow: 8/10 Structure: 7/10 Punches: 7/10 Meta: 7/10 Creativity: 7/10 Overall: 36/50 Vote: Verbal Verbal had a more consistent verse in my opinion, and the metas in it were nice, para started out decetn but started to fade out towards end so I gave it to verbal based on that. |
Phenom :
Paramik Was Weary Of This Battle,Who Could Blaim Him Flow In Instant Messengers Only Time Ya Punches R AIM'n ^^a lil blahh...but iight wordplay Computers Best Friend, Just Another Internet Groupie Ya Avatar Is Self Explanitary net Geek, Buddys Are 2D ^^nice :) Ill Para-Lize Ya MiK..Was Already Impossible To Win This Tourny Is Urs, But Im Afraid No Rap In The Para-Lympic ^^i liked that gd gd... I'd Give You A Win Outta Sympathy, It Won't Be Belived Unthinkable, How Can I Be Beat By A Spider Man-Geek ^^lol........nice...tight closer... Paramik : Verbal Phenom cant lyrically spit venom cause it aint a verb… Cause the way ya venom flows…. easily gets cured by a herb. So you can call me apothecary, the way im removing ya venom. Might as well call him anthrax….. ………………………………the way the poison letters stopped sendin’ ^^nice...but sweetie u stretched a lot..i mean ukept on talkin about the venom in 5 lines... Fact is this kid’s not even important, VP’s the VP without the I. Joined the newbie bashing crew, proves this kid’s not a wise guy. ^^first line had me sayin....ughhh this aint paramik...but the second 1 was a lil better This kid is lines are a joke, I didn't really need to post a verse. The crowd woudn't feel your flow if they were dieing of thirst. ^^i went .....hmm on d first line..but the second 1 had me smilin... Another fag battling me, he always so proud about getting beat. I mean who places shit in their sig, like a link to their Defeat? ^^first of all u cant call that battle a defeat cos its still open...it could be his victory...and second of all...i wasnt really feelin ur closer... both keyed on here i can tell........cos both usualy burn the screen with ur hotness...but phenom,besides the quick shit he dropped,gets this...cos his lines kept on flowin and were better structured with better wordplay..personals and punches...his lines werent stretched too...which gives him another plus....so ima just end up sayin my vote gose to phenom... peace & love 1.. |
Paramik Was Weary Of This Battle,Who Could Blaim Him
Flow In Instant Messengers Only Time Ya Punches R AIM'n meh..... Like Intoxicated Rivers ... Ya Vile Flows Are Shunned Mixin Drinks n Toxins Is The Only Way U Have a Deadly Punch ok.... Computers Best Friend, Just Another Internet Groupie Ya Avatar Is Self Explanitary net Geek, Buddys Are 2D no..... Ill Para-Lize Ya MiK..Was Already Impossible To Win This Tourny Is Urs, But Im Afraid No Rap In The Para-Lympic ok..this one was better I'd Give You A Win Outta Sympathy, It Won't Be Belived Unthinkable, How Can I Be Beat By A Spider Man-Geek no..... Verbal Phenom cant lyrically spit venom cause it aint a verb… Cause the way ya venom flows…. easily gets cured by a herb. ha.....ok So you can call me apothecary, the way im removing ya venom. Might as well call him anthrax….. ………………………………the way the poison letters stopped sendin’. not feelin it Fact is this kid’s not even important, VP’s the VP without the I. Joined the newbie bashing crew, proves this kid’s not a wise guy. na..... This kid is lines are a joke, I didn't really need to post a verse. The crowd woudn't feel your flow if they were dieing of thirst. alright Another fag battling me, he always so proud about getting beat. I mean who places shit in their sig, like a link to their Defeat? ha ha....best bar of the battle here you had some better punches than VP she had some but really didnt hit hard both had personals on their on opp...so it comes down to punches.. v/paramik |
Verbal Phenom wins 2-1.
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