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..Xplicit.. vs VIvID
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due tonight doesnt matter who posts first house rules votes must be broken down 3 in a row is a KO 5 = the win Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 11-08-04 at 05:02 AM Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in. 3-0 KO |
VIvID has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-07-04 11:02 PM.
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..Xplicit.. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-07-04 11:04 PM.
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Vivid your pathetic bitch…your a disgrace to your poor old mother…
Cuz you cant get a win…even if your aliases battle each other… Your just another wannabe…loves garage but claims it's rap… Maybe that'll explain one thing...the reason your so wack… Damn dawg you wack…ya aint ever gonna join a crew worthy of props… Fuck it…to you I've said congrats…but that’s where the respect stops… I stand tall over you…I write acapella…don’t need no beats… And your wack…won’t ever hear your voice on the fuckin streetz... |
Son, had 10 wins I searched found none now sum'n mysterious
How can I take u for a lyrical ride when I cant even take u serious This so called newbe rippin him, even droppin half assed An I'd call em ... a has been but thatd mean he established sum'n in the past Start pm'n ur dik ryders the only sucess to win this text Cuz now..I dont hafta visit a club to see everyones on X |
uppin 4 some votes......
all honest votes appreciated just remeber to break it down |
This was feedback posted for VIvID
checkin the polls.......................................
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This was feedback posted for ..Xplicit..
damn i almost thought this was my name but lol....i was liek wtf...but anyway jsut checkin cant vote Xplicit is in my crew
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upppin this damn battle
been open for weeks not even a vote c'mon now |
Voted For: ..Xplicit..
No Doubt Skriptz took this easily Skriptz you had better multis, structure and flow. Also you ver his harder than his nice verse. Fav- Line Damn dawg you wack…ya aint ever gonna join a crew worthy of props… Fuck it…to you I've said congrats…but that’s where the respect stops… that was hott Vivid- Your Structure seemed almost too short to hit or throw anything decent i really didnt like you flow or structure at all. Decent punches and multis hardley any. Werd Overall -Skriptz |
Xpli
came ok.. nothing really witty, consistent though and had a steady flow, you repeated 'ur wack' a lot... um, it felt monotone though, nothing complex or creative enough.. vivid thought your verse was decent, there was good concepts there but badly worded, making it soft.. flow fell off for a bit too, you could of won it if some lines would of been worded better.. Vote: Xplicit |
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Voted For: ..Xplicit..
Skriptz: Your Vocabulary Was Decent Had Some Decent Words, Structure Was Also Decent The Lines Kind Of Lined Up A Little.....Punches Was There...It Was Hitting Hard...I Kind Of Like How It Just Flowed Out...Good Verse...9.5/10 ViVid: Seriously Vocabulary Was The Most Decent Here...Along With Your Structure..Punches Hmm I Was Never Feeling It If You Call It Punches.... But It Was A Decent Flow.....Untill You Spit The Last Three Lines Wasnt That Good..Kind Of Sloppy First Three Was Better Then Last Three....8.5/10 Vote=Skrpitz |
Voted For: ..Xplicit..
Daym Viv, You Coulda Had It... You Just Needed More Lines... But Since Scriptz Had More Lines He Had Better... Punches Wordplay Ect... I Think You Could Have Beaten Him Though... You Just Didnt Do Enough... Cuz You're Verse Was Picking Up But Then It Just Ended... Oh Well... .One. |
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