life of death/ get it how u live it
 

life reflects on the way you make it,
so if you hate it , it reflects on hatred
im in the dark but ima shine cause i got faith ima make it
the bitter life i know how it tasted
i came in this world with nothin so i aint leaving naked
im a hustla not a g so i aint gotta fake it
fuck a g life im just tryna hustle
lifting pound so i got a lil muscle
im the best and if you say otherwise your face can hit on my knuckle

im dead but not talkin in the physical,
in the spiritual,
this teenage life im livin is typical
if i revived from this life of death it would be a miracle
on my own cause i aint got nobody
i watch life pass like a bitch with nobody
im on my grind but with no dick
i spit so sick
like i got a fever
i spit like a heater
but my life is in a shadow like im standing behind a beaver
aint nothin to it either
~~~~~~~ Get it how u live it ~~~~~~~~~~
i get it how i live it so im hustlin grams
you cant even hold back my flow in a fuckin dam
my life is like got fuckin damn!!
worried about the pigs like a fuckin ham



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can i get some feedback

Nice do some more! I want to see how you improve!

man this shit was igght hopefully it diddnt take much of yout time tho...
overall it was kinda plain diddnt like the ham line that shit was weird..lackin
any origanality or howeve u spell it...sik like a fever is hella sum 98 type shit grow up elevate keep workin hard at it the sky is the limit.....dont quit