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2. Hotshh! Vs. 48. Tstorm
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Battles Go Up On Wednesday, Check Ins Are Due Friday Before 11:59 PM EST. Verses Are Due Sunday Before 11:59 PM EST. 12 Lines No Biting No Recycling No Feeding You May Go 10 Lines If You Would Like But 12 Is The Maximum Good Luck |
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Rnk 2..shit!
lol...chk.. ..... |
jus chkin the time b4 i drop
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fuck it...aint got time..here goes..
you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. . you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse.. far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country |
I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay?
Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand" Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189095 If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship |
you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. .
you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place ^^nah, wasnt feeling this at all.........................1/10 guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse.. far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse ^^nope, weak n really had no basis of a punch..........0/10 This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us ^^decent.wordplay was original but punch was blah....4/10 this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship ^^ok,.................5/10 watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country ^^nah, perdy weak closer.................3/10 . overall, your verses 1st 2 bars were straight ass... picked up a lil but nothin overly creative in your drop exception of the con-vince line, your verse was'nt what i expected, flow was irratic, struc was ok...........8/50 . . I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay? Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away ^^ta storm, some may not get it to flow right, koo...6/10 My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat ^^1st line self glorification was weak hotshh,...but punch was nice....6/10 Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand" ^^this was nice..............good play of his shit..........7.5/10 Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189095 If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV ^^this was koo, link dont really support ya setup from what i read but punch was definately koo...............................7.5/10 Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine ^^already hit this punch once, to repetitive................4/10 About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship ^^liked the worplay, good closer, 8.5/10 . overall hot, you brought some nice personal shit,. liked most of your verse.. creativity was top shelf from what ive seen others drop so far.... wasnt to sure if t-storm dropped a no-show verse but it wasnt on the same level as your verse..........39.5/60<highest yet, good verse |
gud drop hotshh..
but daz rofl @ u givin me like 0/10 n 1/10 n shit.. plz try reading it. |
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re-verb
you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. . you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place not a good start. guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse.. far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse aight, its pickin up. This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us decently wack. this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship haha. watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country god no. *verse was half and half, 50% of your verse was decent. and 50% of your verse was decenly wack, like ive already said. things will hopefully pick up for you. hotshh I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay? Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away decent open My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat what haha? Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand" haha. Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV thats my crew, but hey...still a good bar. Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine decent. About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship haha, real good finish. *the verse was hot, punches were good, fillers were minimul. the flow was real hot.. overrall, shit was fire. vote: hotshh! verses were good, good luck to both. -eph |
Re~verb bit.......just thought i'd let yall know
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how'd he bite?
and i only need 1 more for KO anyway, you'll save me the time |
he bit off of a feeble verse on RB
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you'll fucking no show, and shit thats in the worst case. .
you can't be on fire, when u miss match in the first place EHHH...VERY WEAK...2/10 guys got a huge ego, but against re~verb the duckings worse.. far as conduct, you behaving less talent every fucking verse THERE WAS NO PUNCH....1/10 This guys worse than i thought,Hotshh!, blah, still yet to bust might be able to convince, but u cant con the rest of us GET WHAT YOUR TRYNA SAY...BUT THERE WAS STILL NO PUNCH..2/10 this man's wrong monthly, you ain't hard..so save it, shit cuz you play the bitch on RV.. AND in your relationship THERE WE GO...5/10 watch my metal spray, because your plan's off bluntly n you'll never coast to the win like living in a landlocked country DECENT CLOSER...4/10 OVERALL-13/50(26%) HOTSHH I never No show to this guys Dismay... so why Delay? Cuz when the "son" shine thru..... T-storms Die Away GOOD......6/10 My shit too unique, fuck a name change, kid u a Geek If u da 'underdog' u getting fucked like a Shitzu in Heat OK.....5/10 Look ya Verbs need help, Opposition Proceeds as Planned Cuz the pic under ya name even proves you "Need a Hand" LMAO...8/10 Keep dreaming Smartie, forming a crew but ya team is Sorry http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189095 If u owned the rights to ya name u couldnt be the King of RV LOL...7/10 Look, R e-V erbs get ran thru...... like played Hotshh! rhymes Your name predicted your future...... T-storms will not Shine DECENT...5/10 About this Tourney, I'm passionate....and you just Acting Bitch U thought eatn Mac n Cheese on a boat was true Krafts-man-ship OOOOOOOOOOOO SHIT....9/10 OVERALL-40/60(66%) V/HOTSHH! |
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