Off the Dome
 

i BREW HATRED in my SOUL so u could say i keep it BOTTLED INSIDE/
fuck BEEF i'll DIGEST a PACK OF LIONS so i can say i SWALLOW MY PRIDE/
i dont have to act gangsta for publicity cause i'll know all of its lies/
well connected u could go to SUIT STORES and still couldnt trace all of my TIES//
my attitude is COLD cause my mood likes seasons and it chooses to pick winter/
while my competitive thoughts choose to pick winners/
my pure heart likes to confuse and pick sinners/
but i try to keep my MIND ON TRACK like OLYMPIC SPRINTERS//
i shoot niggas mentally there's no need in takin out a nine/
and make niggas LEAN BACK like LOSIN WEIGHT AROUND THE SPINE/
nigga i JAM on beats like a BROKEN SEMI shootin 8 rounds at a time/
split ur watch stuff it in ur mouth so i HEAR what u SAYIN HALF THE TIME//
fuck flyin wit the WRIGHT TWINZ my two hands are my WRITE TWINS/
ambidextrous wit a pen so with both hands i might win/
ima PALE RIDER like ROLLIN in BUCKET for water in high winds/
born wit a tan so when i sun bathe i try to be light skinned//
nigga im the super woman that pounds heros/
and use a CHEESE GRATER FULL OF NOTHING to recreate GROUND ZERO/
persecuting enough niggas in battles to confound NERO/
evaporate flows comin at me unsaturate niggas skin until they appear old//
new drug HOOKED on me i got u under control dudes/
no ones comin close/
never use the term OVERDOSE/
too metaphorical so i say i'll MARILYN MONROE U//
my sound vibrates thru ya headphones like cells wit no ringers/
and askin why im nice is like askin why hand grenades have no fingers/
the type to bring a choir wit no singers/
to prove that im the nicest acapella and no one else known can linger//

Concept wasn't too original but thats okay...quit putting them words in caps though, it'll be equally nice without them. Vocab was tight and so was your flow, had some nice imagery and wordplay in there for real. This is just straight spitting from the core so it's always nice to read stuff like that. Keep on doing ya thing gurl, i'll be certainly looking forward to it!

Peace

thanx 4 da luv girl....yea i know sorry its just a habit at times......come on yall uppin dis shit!!

you be puttin up some hot shit lil C, dats 4real. keep it up...
good vocab, wordplay was hurtin them, and overall it was dope
8/10.....i was feelin it
ay, keep droppin and i'll keep watchin!
and keep reppin tha D, all day baby!!!
~1~

thanx 4 da feed SR it will b returned.......uppin dis shit

damn Lil C.i see you still droppin hot shit like camels in da desert.this was a hot drop.feelin' it all.keep em comin' baby girl.