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Ma$fit 07-17-05 01:55 PM

October 4th vs MiSk
 
Battle Rules:

2 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-17-05 at 02:25 PM

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System 07-17-05 01:59 PM

October 4th has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 01:59 PM.

System 07-17-05 02:01 PM

MiSk has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-17-05 02:01 PM.

Ma$fit 07-17-05 02:01 PM

Dawg how many times u got writers ‘block’, but my ‘punches’ knock da ya down.
For MiSk this is his last title match fight and this is going to be this bitch’s last round.

MiSk 07-17-05 02:02 PM

After takin' this loss.. don't get ya panties twisted in a knot
yur spittin' like an alcoholic, ya don't know when to stop

Ma$fit 07-17-05 02:04 PM

good punch dawg.....can we get some votes plz!!!!!

C-Hood 07-17-05 02:07 PM

Voted For: MiSk

Dawg how many times u got writers ‘block’, but my ‘punches’ knock da ya down.
For MiSk this is his last title match fight and this is going to be this bitch’s last round.

YOUR LINES WERE STRETHCED LONGER THEN MARKS ON A PREGNANT CHICK...



After takin' this loss.. don't get ya panties twisted in a knot
yur spittin' like an alcoholic, ya don't know when to stop

YOUR PUNCHLINE IS WHAT GOT IT FOR YOU...WASN'T THE BEST THAT I HAVE HEARD BUT IT WAS ENUFF...

B To The D 07-17-05 02:18 PM

This was feedback posted for October 4th
 
october add me on aim swiftmc2005..................

N.Tavarez 07-17-05 02:23 PM

Voted For: MiSk

MiSk
Your punch was alright. Wasn't that hard but hard enough to get the win. 1st line lacked a little, 2nd line was pretty good, good concept and creativity

October 4th
Your concept is kinda played. Also both your lines were stretched which ruins the flow to the bar.

Thassarap 07-17-05 03:50 PM

Voted For: MiSk

close battle here
both had good wordplay, one wack line, and one good line
oct4's closing was wack, and misk's opening wasn't great either- obviously a forced rhyme to set up his closing punch
misk's punch hit harder, tho, so i think he took this one
also, misk's punch was on the closing, and it helps to have a solid end to ya verse, especially in a 1-2 punch type of battle
oct4, if u'd switched ur lines around...

13th. 07-17-05 05:19 PM

This was feedback posted for October 4th
 
ch-ch-check in da pollz a nicee battle!!!!!!!!!!!!

NaRc-UzI 07-17-05 06:40 PM

Voted For: MiSk

Dawg how many times u got writers ‘block’, but my ‘punches’ knock da ya down.
For MiSk this is his last title match fight and this is going to be this bitch’s last round.
4/10 it was streched and wasnt really a punch it wasnt hard but it did flow well

After takin' this loss.. don't get ya panties twisted in a knot
yur spittin' like an alcoholic, ya don't know when to stop
6/10 it was simple,it flowed well,andwas a preety good punch

vote-misk



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Daubs 07-17-05 06:46 PM

This was feedback posted for MiSk
 
Both came week from previous shits i seen, but misk took this imo.

Typical 07-17-05 06:47 PM

Voted For: MiSk

Vote: MiSk

MiSk... your first line is obviously forced to make the 2nd work. Your 2nd line was funny as hell and creative. Overall it was a pretty good punch. I'll give you 80/100

October 4th... first of all your punch was streatched which ruined the structure and flow to it. Also your 2nd line was false. This wasnt a title match. Also your concept is a little played. I'll give you 70/100


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