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DaTrusHurtz 04-27-07 02:22 PM

25. Lay Fear (0-0) vs. 26. Top C Krit (0-0)
 
G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Dead Celebrity Picture Battles

This week, we will be resurrecting the lives of many great individuals. Diss your opponent on their picture and on the life behind that picture. Do your research and be witty. Good Luck.

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Lay Fear as Rosa Parks

vs.


Top C Krit as Martin Luther King


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00AM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
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top C krit. 04-28-07 10:46 AM

you goin down cuz..

Alrite rv, now listen to me this battle one sided I'd rather turn an spue
I'm the backbone of black revolution..but shit, ain't noone heard of you
Rosa Parks knows the part to play..shit no black guy would ride you..
how you expect them to follow u? your whiter than the guy BESIDE YOU!
Jus cuz you a girl I wont' show no mercy, I'll just smash you on the curb an.
smile...cuz I'm scannin the pic wondering? is that a fuckin hat or a TURBAN!!?
All my years your name has never been brought to my attention, fact found
ur so fuckin un recognizable...more then the guys face in the back ground!
I hate to curse n hurt u..ur so blind your not sure where ur headin c
cuz the only way you have progressed us..is by whackin off the ENEMY!!..

Lay. 04-28-07 11:30 AM

Ya known for your organized protests..I'll make ya dead to ya nieces
u a 'peacemaker'?....thats what they call me after I shred ya to pieces
I said you was heatless, lets hear your influential speech..or half a scream
only time anyone hear 'of MLK beatin Rosa' is if its after 'I have a dream'!
I pass n scheme n there no need for this battle, I'll drop n erase this cuz
'washingtons' a location? na..jus a description of what ur occupation was
n' anyone can be stated as just' or right when seen from a bitches eye
u keep a eye out for dick riders? but in ya pic..keepin ya eye on a dick 2 ride!
well here is about to be 'tennessee'..all u ever did was harass a nation
n' for talkin shit I'll put one thru ya throat.like I'm repeatin the assasination

lol..u done jake

DaTrusHurtz 05-01-07 03:43 PM

Uppin for votes

Lay. 05-02-07 07:05 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.phpp=3164178&posted=1#post3164178post3164178
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...4179post3164179
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...4181post3164181
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...4183post3164183

my links..

§howcase 05-02-07 07:14 PM

Alrite rv, now listen to me this battle one sided I'd rather turn an spue
I'm the backbone of black revolution..but shit, ain't noone heard of you


vs.


I said you was heatless, lets hear your influential speech..or half a scream
only time anyone hear 'of MLK beatin Rosa' is if its after 'I have a dream'!
^^ that was pretty nice



This was pretty much weak other than that one line from Lay Fear, I was really feeling it. Because of that, I gotta give this to Lay Fear. That one line took it for duke, not much else to say.

V/ Lay Fear

DiZzy 05-02-07 07:21 PM

weak battle


I said you was heatless, lets hear your influential speech..or half a scream
only time anyone hear 'of MLK beatin Rosa' is if its after 'I have a dream'!
this was alright i guess

so v// lay

Popcorn. 05-02-07 08:02 PM

top:
Alrite rv, now listen to me this battle one sided I'd rather turn an spue
I'm the backbone of black revolution..but shit, ain't noone heard of you

vs

lay:
I said you was heatless, lets hear your influential speech..or half a scream
only time anyone hear 'of MLK beatin Rosa' is if its after 'I have a dream'!




This came down to line vs line.




Vote = Lay Fear

TonyTone 05-02-07 09:29 PM

dunno why the fuk every1 keeps quotin top's opener cuz everyone has def hearda rosa parks so there goes the personal. the guy in the background was actually a good concept but worded horribly. the turban shit was decent i guess.
meh, wasnt feelin anything in lay's verse actually. even if the concepts were any good, all the decoration n bad wording woulda fucked it up anyway imo....sorry just bein truthful
v/ top c

uncle phil 05-02-07 09:30 PM

I said you was heatless, lets hear your influential speech..or half a scream
only time anyone hear 'of MLK beatin Rosa' is if its after 'I have a dream'!

best line in the battle the whiter then you line was cool by Top but thatwas it.... nothin else stuck out at all

vote - Top C krit

-Coop- 05-02-07 10:12 PM

Lay Fear:
I pass n scheme n there no need for this battle, I'll drop n erase this cuz
'washingtons' a location? na..jus a description of what ur occupation was
I liked this.
I said you was heatless, lets hear your influential speech..or half a scream
only time anyone hear 'of MLK beatin Rosa' is if its after 'I have a dream'!
This was ok too.

Secret:
Rosa Parks knows the part to play..shit no black guy would ride you..
how you expect them to follow u? your whiter than the guy BESIDE YOU!
The concept would've been decent if you woulda found a picture that actually supported the diss. She looks light-skinned, he looks white.

Man, another weak battle.

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VOTE: LAY FEAR
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Civil. 05-03-07 10:05 AM

I pass n scheme n there no need for this battle, I'll drop n erase this cuz
'washingtons' a location? na..jus a description of what ur occupation was
I said you was heatless, lets hear your influential speech..or half a scream
only time anyone hear 'of MLK beatin Rosa' is if its after 'I have a dream'!

.vs.

Rosa Parks knows the part to play..shit no black guy would ride you..
how you expect them to follow u? your whiter than the guy BESIDE YOU



Both showed potential in alot of lines, but really lacked in wording.

v/Lay.

DaTrusHurtz 05-03-07 10:07 AM

Jus cuz you a girl I wont' show no mercy, I'll just smash you on the curb an.
smile...cuz I'm scannin the pic wondering? is that a fuckin hat or a TURBAN!!?

vs.

I said you was heatless, lets hear your influential speech..or half a scream
only time anyone hear 'of MLK beatin Rosa' is if its after 'I have a dream'!

Yea, pretty weak battle. Concepts weren't even that bad, u guys just need a lot of help on ur wording at this point. Uhh real close, could go either way, both ur quotables weren't that bad. I thought Lay's last 3 bars really killed 'em, they weren't that good. Top C Krit's verse was slightly more consistent so I got him takin' this.

Vote - Top C Krit

DaTrusHurtz 05-03-07 10:08 AM

Lay Fear wins 5-3

Lay Fear WINS 1-0
Top C Krit LOSES 0-1


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