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Stares fill the hallways of the lost minds in compromise
So stand tall, tell your thoughts and grasp hold your prize
Its there, it’s for you, your name is engraved in the thickening gold
So reach down from your pride and realize my hand is here to hold

The water swims with you, see your company is one it enjoys
But don’t let your guard down, its sugary sweet but its insides are coy
Remember the path you floated down along, peacefully in your dreams
And don’t let the fish misguide you, as tempting as their bubbles seem

Every single breathing woman has her right to a sacred privacy
Yet does that right not hold firm to the baby girl growing inside of me?
Rights disappear and a mother’s greed kills yet another innocent child
It’s never thought of again, no prison time, no orange suit, no law suit ever filed

People have died and sacrificed everything just for humankinds deserved freedom
So why do we kill the weakest and undermind our own rising kingdom?
Speak with me; make our voices heard above the thunderous evil minds
For you’ll soon realize that helping in anyway is the best prize you’ll ever find

T

this was real good, i think i understand what you are trying to say, maybe u can give a breif description forme, cuz i luv reading poetry, but i also like to know what the poem is about n shit ya know. ne way. u had some nice word play in that.

People have died and sacrificed everything just for humankinds deserved freedom
So why do we kill the weakest and undermind our own rising kingdom?
Speak with me; make our voices heard above the thunderous evil minds
For you’ll soon realize that helping in anyway is the best prize you’ll ever find

Thats my favorite part, cuz if u look at it closeley and take it to your head you acn really feel how real it is. ne way thats all i gots to say, stay up n stay strong, keep at work partna pce/

Mmm... Good poetry. FINALLY... thank you filed :)... I loved it.. the metaphors and similes and the symbolism... The imagery and the emotion... Great message... I have to thank you again :)... Great Drop

Stares fill the hallways of the lost minds in compromise
So stand tall, tell your thoughts and grasp hold your prize
Its there, it’s for you, your name is engraved in the thickening gold
So reach down from your pride and realize my hand is here to hold

^^ first two lines meaning that people you cant decide where they are going often become lost and perhaps ridiculed so open your mouth and let people know where you stand on a subject and why. Last two, is that there is an end to this insanity that comes with keeping your mouth shut to much just open your eyes and see it, look past your pride and realize you may need some help and im more then welcome to help you out


The water swims with you, see your company is one it enjoys
But don’t let your guard down, its sugary sweet but its insides are coy
Remember the path you floated down along, peacefully in your dreams
And don’t let the fish misguide you, as tempting as their bubbles seem

^^ the population in total mostly goes with you for everyone wants to have the some comfort of another person around, but don’t get caught off guard for good things always have an evil side to them. Remember your goals and dreams you’ve always had and don’t let any of these people change them not for anything they might offer.


Every single breathing woman has her right to a sacred privacy
Yet does that right not hold firm to the baby girl growing inside of me?
Rights disappear and a mother’s greed kills yet another innocent child
It’s never thought of again, no prison time, no orange suit, no law suit ever filed

^^ this one is pretty self-explanatory. But its where all the top peraching falls together on a topic, abortion. Like said every woman has her right to privacy, but what about if the baby is a girl does it not? It seems that the babies rights disappear just for the mother’s greed and she gets away with murder.

People have died and sacrificed everything just for humankinds deserved freedom
So why do we kill the weakest and undermine our own rising kingdom?
Speak with me; make our voices heard above the thunderous evil minds
for you’ll soon realize that helping in anyway is the best prize you’ll ever find

^^ pretty simple again, humans have given up their lives and freedom just to move the human race along, so why are we killing our children? Our rising kingdom. Yeah last two lines are pretty damn clear too lol.

Anywho thanks for all the replies. I’ll make sure to get back to your guy’s work. Till then better days lol.

Tera